Marvel: Abstract entity
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Description: Mc is originally from a possible future 2050 of our world where human beings were not able to commit to stopping climate change, he was chosen by an omnipotent being that MC likes to refer to as ×÷+- because of some reason. ×÷+- granted MC's 3 wishes and in exchange, he had to be transmigrated to a world of ×÷+-'s choice.
Mc thought it was Dceu because he got reincarnated there but that was only because of the influence of the wishes he asked for and he had yet to be transmigrated to the real universe that ×÷+- chose for him.
PS: As you may already guess from the title of the fiction, this book is a little bit influenced by my feelings towards maths which will be observed in MC's feelings towards ×÷+-.
Just for fun at the start. trying my hand at writing something for the first time, I don't own dc-comics and marvel comics. Though I'm writing this fiction before that, I have to confess that im not that knowledgeable about MCU, just a fan of it so don't expect it to be completely accurate.
update rate depends on my mood so there's that too and English is not my first language so I thought I should inform you about that too.
thnx for reading until now.
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I hope MC doesn't become goody two shoes like other superheroes and until now the journey has been wonderful. great and slow development. the Dc arc could be considered as a prologue by itself and the story begin from chapter 15 in my opinion, im loving it. good luck to the author.
2 CHAPTERS WASTED TALING ABOUT RELIGION AS IF THE AUTHOR DOES NOG MAKE HIS READERS WAIT LONG FOR CHAPTERS HE EVEN WASTED 2 CHAPTERS ON RELIGION TALK. I MYSELF am a Muslime but if I like to study about my Religion or all the other I would not try learning from a random Novel but reading the Holy books themselves
after chapter 17 this story became trash 🗑️ . .
Nothing special about it mc made some of the most basic wishes you can make. the interactions between characters is ok for a webnovel story.other then that nothing makes me wanna keep reading it
I love the story. What else can say I love it. Please don't make it harem. The story was great it has great of family bonding without using them as mean to get strong. The mc was good with that amount of intelligence and scheming I really like
This is a new author and right now the novel is amazing i love the story and how the MC doesn't see them as tool's and actually see them as family. The interaction he has with them is harmonious. p.s Their is never failure only improvemen for the author.
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mc is stupid, very naive, acts with his emotions, beta mc, novel is very cliche, mc only knows that power will help him etc but he plays the protagonist. He was going to use the codex himself but he didn't, that's stupid.
First!!! Okay, so the author likes to shamelessly claim the first comment if you don't mind and if you do then you should have written it before me, sorry but no sorry. if you have any thoughts about how my writing style and grammar can be better then pls write them in the comments or review.
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This novel piqued my interest. Oh my God, I didn't expect this turn to be better and better each chapter. Keep it up! and I can not wait for next chapter
Essa história tem um potencial imensurável, se o autor tiver tempo, saude, a história se tornara algo grande. Sobre o futuro romance do protagonista, sinceramente, eu espero que tenha um harém, mais claro, caso não tenha uma entrada para esse harém (2 a 4 mulheres), a IA tera um potencial para ser sua única parceira romântica, por favor querido autor/ autora espero que vc construa essa história com a maior paciência possivel......😊 Boa sorte🤙(caso você va ler esse comentário, ele esta em português - Brazil)
as of ch. 43 i can say 35 of them were fillers. mc is a beta simp who let ppl walk over him and scuffed as if he is above them.. story is all over the place. first arc was nothing but a filler on its own with nothing to do with MCU. mc with all his knowledge is dumb as rock. so I Hope author stops writing for it's clear that it's not his strong point.
Bland is the best way to summarize this ff for me. I read up to 26 chaps and soo far nothing interesting has happened. The ff isn't terrible but it ain't good as well. The most notable issues i had were: 1. The english is sometimes good sometimes bad like 1 min i understand everything then comes a paragraph that makes me go "????" 2. When i read that it would start Dc then be Marvel i expected the mc to actually interact with dc world longer then go to marvel like a multiverse ff but it felt like the dc part was mostly filler that can be summarized into 3 chaps probably, especially since it felt like the reason Dc world was used was just to arm the mc with knowledge and fighting skills b4 dumping him in marvel. 3. The interactions between mc and the characters wasn't really the best. To me he felt like an emotionless doll from age 1-9 when he interacted with his brother, when he grew up more it was ok since he showed more emotions especially to kara but when he went to marvel it felt like mc suddenly became a mix of an edgy/autistic/loner when he interacted with tania especially since it's just another cliché damsel about to be r*p*d. 4. There was nothing to hook/make me want to read more, no epic fight scenes, nothing at all. It's just a slice of life of an mc learning,eating,creating,etc... 5. The Mc's 3rd wish which is 220 IQ (which is used to learn things quicker if i remember correctly) like sure this is author's choice but wow is it a waste of a wish. TLDR: I don't hate the ff but i don't like it either it's just bland and doesn't have anything wanting me to keep reading more