Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
A typical man on his teens who had lived a harsh life dies in the hands of Truck-kun(?) and was transported to a random God who gave him a chance to be reincarnated in another world.
He was given a chance to grant five of his wishes and was reincarnated...in a random(?) anime world where he was a [Spirit] accompanied with some... unnecessary perks like the ability to travel through other worlds albeit randomly and a [Fragment].
And when he landed on his first world, he was not reincarnated as a normal [Spirit] mainly because of that...[Fragment], he was shifted into an [Inverse Spirit]. A being described in that world to be the embodiment of disasters, ruin, and chaos.
How would his endeavors turn out to be in this new life of his?
Would he be even successful on his journey?
Would he even 'fix' himself in the process?
Or would he even travel worlds on the first place?
Who knows, come read and find out.
Disclaimer: I don't own the original works that would be included in this fanfic as such as some of the characters, stories, and arts. They belong to their respective owners.
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Warning: You will read some cringe shît in the early chaps but please bear with it. I promise ya, the later chaps would be worth reading and investing your time on
Chapter Update Release: Yeah bruh... I don't have any stable update time so meh.
This is also my first fan-fic so please go easy on me hehe (≧▽≦)
[Edit: 5/19/22- The beginning two arcs is totally rough. As in, yeah. The story was still in its testing point back then, so it is inevitable... But right now, I think it's worth reading starting at the third arc, the MC is still not the best but is now clearly showing some development. ;)]
Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~
Just a normal 5 star review just like many Authors in this platform do! UmU! Anyways, this would be an extension to the Q&A section part of my other review, be sure to comment down your thoughts guys and thank you very much for reading this novel!
One of the few Date a Live fanfics out there so I gotta give my support . 😀😃 😃😀😃😀
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This fic definitely has potential so i will give you my full support author-san. I myself am a harem lover so i hope to see some good romance in this fic and please for the love of every holy beings in existence don't make the mc capture girls like pokemon! I don't care if you put 1000 girls in the harem just give some development in their relationship first.
This fic is actually good because the Mc is not a harem-seeking kind of guy which is kinda "rare" considering almost all the fanfic in ranking is all about harem and some of them are H*ntai world. Also writing quality is good because almost there is no grammatical error. The update is quite f*cked up(in a good way) so I will give it a 4 stars. Character design well.... His background is quite cringed but don't worry it's only half the chapter so all good. anyways that's all for now.
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The idea, the events, everything is good, the problem with the way you narrate the events is boring. I go down a lot and do not read most of the speech because it is boring and I do not feel any progress in words, and even the fights are boring, so whoever has long patience should read it, but whoever is upset about useless dialogues, I do not advise
You know it has been sometime since I did a review for this fic (should be my third one). This had truly gone far since the first time I had seen it. So keep up the good work author-san and pump up the chapters for us readers!😁 Also judging from the lastest chap this might be the calm before the storm type situation because war might break out next chap. So if you're reading this review then I hope you are prepared author-san, because we want our full harem and Shiori. Ps: I just realized that I got second place on your story with a fan value of 90. What's the deal with that?
KURUMI!!!! One of the few DAL novels out there, hope that this is also good as some of your previous novels [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I have no complaints with this fic, it's 10/10, although I wish it would improve the update time, everything else is a 5 ☆ I hope there will be more "Date a live" fics, since this is one of the best, and hopefully there is a multiverse for "Fate" which would be nice.
Good writing quality as of late. Except for the fact that you often post chapters with broken or uncompleted sentences. Need to fix that. Story Development is going steady so far. Not the best, but still in good standards. Character design... not the best but still bearable. Nothing much really changed and I hope you may work on that next. Updating Stability, 5 chapters a week is decent specially the chapters you are posting is ranging up on 2.5 to 3k words. World background is interesting yet confusing at the same time. I hope you create more chapters which some give depth to this matter since some things are just very confusing at this point. Overall, this novel is still good in my opinion. Though it clearly needs some improvements and adjustments specially on the MC, I can still conclude that this FF is a good read.
I can see that this story has a list of potential and I am confident that the author will use the potential of this Fanfic to its limits and beyond xd. No for real I do hope that the author will continue with this story as i really enjoy reading this Fanfic.
Now this is high quality stuff. The mc is somewhat nuts and a few screws loose but that's expected if life treated you like THAT... Now, this is a hârêm but i cant figure out how mc will even get in a relationship with his personality, he needs to... well, not be a broken person... I look forward to how mc develops further to become better, i dont think he will go into an evil route. Now Kurumi should go nuts about him, she can see the "Time" of people and MC being half god he is literally immortal, so the time Kurumi would get if she manages to "Eat him" would be infinite as well, this should be enough to cause kurumi to go mad about him
Everything to be found in a good fanfiction can be found here even if at times it will look like it’s slow or lagging behind I assure you this fanfiction is worth giving a try to read if you like Date a Live and a fun twist on the story it has potential but we’ll see where it’ll go in the future