The world is ruled differently until an incident that changed humanity forever and caused chaos forcing to change the world order following 12 Apostles until a stranger changes everything and gets to work a way to fix this world's endless chaos. Ruler, Vanguard, Savior, Judge, Castle, Puppeteer, Praetor, Arbiter, Intervention, Adroit, Heretic, and Shroud. The Twelve Apostles of the Current World will be challenged by a Single man whom had been given a mission to fix this world.
It's 3.8 stars for me. So the story first goes on about 200 years ago and it is intriguing. The plot as well. Though I noticed that there are no punctuation marks in some phrases like commas, it is essential so one wouldn't be confused in reading. There were a few omissions though I suggest that the long paragraph should be split into bits, long paragraphs tend to make the narration a bit messy. And in terms of dialogue, you should make a space between the narration and the dialogue so that the dialogue won't get mixed up with the narrative phrases. Though all that's said, keep up the good work, author💯