A child who was not embraced by the village and grew with the loyalty from a monster
This is Nozi's life ever since her 13th birthday when her "father" had told her the truth about her past and where she came from. After the death of her family.
Revenge wasn't enough to quench Nozi's bloodlust. She decided to work as an assasin under the king. Quickly adapting, Neia became the kingdom's most feared assasin who never let
anything get inbetween her and her work.
A dangerous new threat ravaged in the kingdom, forcing Nozi to put her pride aside and work along side others.
...Unexpected secrets
...Love
...And betrayal!
Will they be able to face the obstacles what lie ahead of them? Or will the truth tear them apart?
The plot itself has uncanny potential; there are few errors though. Somehow I feel there is a need to improve on some incomplete sentences. Well, that was only chapter one and my impression. The dialogue is great, but the characters are not so distinct. Still, it is only the first chapter, but I hope you would improve on it in the subsequent ones. Nice story, keep up the great work.