well captain America is passifist in this, became a dog well that was nothing new. spare the enemies, during war what were you doing Cap, didn't even try to kill mountain
3 years ago
21
Alferian
The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
3 years ago
13
Sic_Parvis_Magna
Not many Captain America fics here on WN. Not many good GoT fics either. I like it. It's Nicely written and the style is quite like Anne Frank's diary.
3 years ago
11
Death_Scythe
lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.
3 years ago
10
TreacherousVoid
I fell asleep reading this. If you read it dont come in expecting it to be action packed and with a MC who has ambition and a goal.
Captain America is just there….while things happen around him. You wouldnt know he was captain america if he wasnt wearing red white and blue 24/7 and talking about how he misses peggy all the time, otherwise youd think you were following the story POV of some background character.
3 years ago
10
Celleborn
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
2 years ago
6
OrangePanther
Shameless Self Review. Tee Hee.
Though, I would like to once again point out, I don't own this work, it is a collective effort made on Alternate history.
I hope you enjoy.
3 years ago
6
Slxxpy
Diary writing sucks and you can’t properly explore the side characters emotion and growth. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
3 years ago
3
SkullyBoiJedi12
Captain America huh.
Nice.
I hope you finish this. I liked the first few chapters and I want to see how this goes.
I hope you pair Steve with Dany. lulz
3 years ago
2
Axiljan
It is well written, that is something that is evident.
I am seriously looking forward to where this goes. It has a great amount of potential that's for sure.
3 years ago
2
Azmodan_TheLesser
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2 years ago
1
unknown_seer
One of the good stories I read here on Webnovel.The story had good beginning good story line and pretty good ending There was some inconsistency in character but overall it was well written .
9 months ago
0
Alberto_Aguilar_4637
en general la historia es perfecta, tiene la justificación de ser relatada como un diario, por lo cual los saltos de tiempos ( que no son largos en su) pasan desapercibidos.
10 months ago
0
Azazel_Roy
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a year ago
0
RampagerX
Really good story. It is just the good length and well written, the diary updates are quite good and make for an interesting read. The characters are recognizable and the world background is respected aven though Captain America does give change in the story.
well captain America is passifist in this, became a dog well that was nothing new. spare the enemies, during war what were you doing Cap, didn't even try to kill mountain
The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
Not many Captain America fics here on WN. Not many good GoT fics either. I like it. It's Nicely written and the style is quite like Anne Frank's diary.
lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.
I fell asleep reading this. If you read it dont come in expecting it to be action packed and with a MC who has ambition and a goal. Captain America is just there….while things happen around him. You wouldnt know he was captain america if he wasnt wearing red white and blue 24/7 and talking about how he misses peggy all the time, otherwise youd think you were following the story POV of some background character.
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
Shameless Self Review. Tee Hee. Though, I would like to once again point out, I don't own this work, it is a collective effort made on Alternate history. I hope you enjoy.
Diary writing sucks and you can’t properly explore the side characters emotion and growth. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Captain America huh. Nice. I hope you finish this. I liked the first few chapters and I want to see how this goes. I hope you pair Steve with Dany. lulz
It is well written, that is something that is evident. I am seriously looking forward to where this goes. It has a great amount of potential that's for sure.
Reveal Spoiler
One of the good stories I read here on Webnovel.The story had good beginning good story line and pretty good ending There was some inconsistency in character but overall it was well written .
en general la historia es perfecta, tiene la justificación de ser relatada como un diario, por lo cual los saltos de tiempos ( que no son largos en su) pasan desapercibidos.
Reveal Spoiler
Really good story. It is just the good length and well written, the diary updates are quite good and make for an interesting read. The characters are recognizable and the world background is respected aven though Captain America does give change in the story.