DC: God of Momentum

İ don't find reading about a chubby, clumsy man drown in his miserible life and a subtle hero complex enjoyable, sorry and knowing the fact that things wil somehow work out for him in the end despite his lack of intelligence and wisdom as someone with a high importance in the world of gods is frustrating, so no i don't want to read his pathetic life somehow being elevated.

he keep saying that barry doesn't use the speed force at full potential but himself doesn't use it at full potential, he keeps training to overcome mental barriers that shouldn't even exist because he already knows how much power he can have, the power has always been the same, the only thing that limits him is the user's will

Mediocre... The MC is really unlikable which is pretty huge since the MC can pretty much make or break a SI fic... He's kind of a weeb who saw some edgy anime for the first time and decided to mold his whole persona after the protagonist... The writing quality is better than 99% of garbage on this site but that's not that much of a compliment... Overall it's 3/5 with potential to be better...

Really like the story. I hope you don’t drop it like other DC stories. It shows how different a human being could really get with powers if they didn’t have the same hero morals as flags or Superman. Hope you continue this story.

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ngl I love this take on the story and he does have a point throughout the flash tv series he could of taken out so many of them if he didn't keep stopping to have a chat instead of taking the opportunity to shut them down

A dense story. Can be a little cringe. But a real read. I already notice the cringe going away. So I am giving five stars for a hopeful story.

One of the first decent DC fanfics I can read without dropping almost instantly. Keep doing what you're doing and please don't drop. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero. A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Arts( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.

10/10 .

is there romance.

hope you continue writing this, it's a great one ....,......................................................................mmmm.....mmmmmnmnnm........

one of the best fanfics I've ever read would highly recommend reading 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

So far so good, no real complaints or critiques, my only gripe is the fact that theres not more chapters but what can you do. I hope the author keeps at it and doesn't drop it. It would be a real let-down.