The Darkest Kingdoms: Return of Low-Earth

I think the quality of the story is pretty good in general, I wish there's more details on the environment and the school where the King is studying. Or even the study room. Maybe the Author can slow down the pace a little and add more worldbuilding cause I do like the combination of King's Era + some futuristic or modern object. Like a mix of styles? It's pretty unique take and I would give this book a chance as the story develops. [img=fp]

The storyline is interesting and the world background has also been described elaborately. There are some common grammatical mistakes at the beginning chapters. The idea of presence of futuristic things like astronaut painting, and many such things seemed quite odd to me for a king era, maybe I presumed it incorrectly. The writing style is unique and could be improved further with better vocabulary. Good luck author!

Great read, i had a lot of fun with this work. I can tell the author is trying their best with it, and have a lot of passion for the work, I look forward to more!

This is such a nice story. The story flows really well and the characters are interesting. The first chapter got me really hook up. Keep it up, author! <3