Branwen
Lawrence Flyn was many things.
Served in the army during WW2, he took place in many battles. He wasn't particularly strong or even incredibly skilled with guns. For the longest time he didn't know why he lived, when so many friends of his died.
At the Omaha Beach, he saw so many of his fellow soldiers cut down by enemy fire and explosions.
During his time out of the army, many of his fellow soldiers had died from their debilitating injuries.
He found out though. He survived, not due to his skills or strength, but because of his unstoppable will and madness.
He hadn't cared for his life since he was a young boy. Father leaving him with a sick Mother. He took any job a child could do but in the end, his Mother still died. Trying to move on with his life, he fell in love eventually. But she too was killed during their trip to Hawaii when the Japanese attacked Pearl Harbor. He joined the army, not out of patriotism, but hate. His spite for the world grew like a fire from that day on. Hoping for himself to die in the war, he never got his wish.
The years went on but still, his spite never left him. It wasn't until the year 2010 at the tender age of 95 that he finally saw his foolishness. All that bitterness and hate he carried made him miserable. Life was unfair, but one should never give up on the smallest chance to be happy.
In his retirement home he began to make friends with the other residents. Finding hobbies and talking with them.
Eventually, he got into anime. It was introduced by one of his friend's Grandsons when he visited. He used the time he had left to indulge in the shows made by the Country he loathed until just recently.
He spent the rest of his days comfortably, waiting to be reunited with his Lover once again when he finally passed on in 2018.
That was what Raven Branwen remembered right after killing the Maiden to acquire her powers. She fell to her knees and shivered with tears in her magically blazing eyes.
"Wh..What have I.. done..?"
i know there arent any chapters to rate on, but based on your other fanfic, you are certainly a great writer. amazing is all i can say about your writing. make sure not to make too many fanfics that it takes too much of your time. I've seen writers make too many fanfic and they lose motivation due to the constant need to divide attention
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Just the first chapter makes for an interesting hook. Im looking forward to see where this goes. ★★★ ★★★ ★★★★★ ★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★ ★★★★★ ★★★ ★
Updated review: No clear storyline/narrative just world hoping and creating new logic for each world. Characters have halted all progression because the author has already made a 'set in stone' path, which I will add has yet to even begin it's introductory stage. Writing is still good in terms of literacy quality. World's background has been completely destroyed with the introduction of Type-Moon/Nasuverse crossover. In short summary, read without brain usage and you should be good.
I'm addicted to Yuri and I can't stop it
Do you want a story about a Raven from RWBY that remembers her past life? And it was not a very good life? How about some Yuri with characters? Power growth? You're in the right place~.
Yeah so not enough people be ratin'! I wanna get this out there so here's a shameless 5 star review for my fic.
I'm genuinely enjoying this fan-fiction and it would be a shame if you were to drop this so please keep up the excellent work. so anyone reading this review I think you will enjoy this book if you're not already reading the book.
the novel is quite good and one should read a novel by themselves then reading a review sure a review helps but who knows weather u like the novel or not so just try the novel there is little to no grammatical errors but the one bad thing about this novel is update stabilty as for reast i have no probs
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Hopefully it will be smooth in character development and the background of the character development world, and the story will be satisfying.
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