Naruto:The Golden Ninja
Author: Daoistsxyzpoke
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One day while Tsunade was hiding from her debtors he found a boy with a golden eye.
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just a canon rehash so nothing new just a canon rehash so nothing new just a canon rehash so nothing new just a canon rehash so nothing new just a canon rehash so nothing new just a canon rehash so nothing new
Never seen zero reviews before.. well I'm the first.. just completed 2 chapters so can't write much.. Golden eyes do seem intriguing.. and a weird MC but your English needs some work.. it's bad..
Alright man look, you have to explain changes in a character, because if you don’t it is confusing. You had something going for you in the first volume but there are rarely any character interactions and events that can throw off the reader. You have a great concept behind the story but something’s were kind of off a bit. Good luck writing and don’t be afraid to make your volumes longer if you want to add more detail into some events.
Interesting story nd a decent character development but not much character background feels like he came from nowhere. Hopefully mc changes a lot in canon.