Ascension of the Samsara Sage

So, overall, my honest opinion. I read until chapter 10. Yes, not very far, but the whole Novel feels so forced. The MC is cringe with a part hypocrite and screaming. Also arrogant. The world feels bland, the story progress is not right, and everything felt like I read an anime, but written by a child. Grammar is very good, but honestly, that's the single thing I can approve of this novel. Not worth my time reading it, sadly. I had high hopes, but that was crushed real quick.

Never mind changed my rating from a Four to a three it started off good but around chapter 13 things just started going downhill the main character is just annoying like his personality changes way too much and no it is not character development it's just inconsistency for a story-based on Magic and the main character who was obsessed with magic a lot of it is barely expanded on the power system we just get names of the ranks and some vague details but that's it , read up to chapter 41 but I've decided to drop it

The book is heavily inspired by Naruto tbh. From sages to frogs that you reggg boi (like jiraya boi) and also the kitsune (fox). But overall a good read.

So I made a review before... but I deleted it because of how arrogant it sounded. This novel is definitely not the best, in fact, I'd call it pretty mid. To write it, I took inspiration from Naruto and a few other places. The first hundred chapters features a few Naruto gimmicks and I don't know if that would ruin the immersion for anyone crazy enough to read my work, but if it does, I sincerely do apologize for that. After the first hundred chapters though, I can assure you that I did away with the whole Naruto nonsense. Hopefully you guys can enjoy the story even with my blunders and if you don't, maybe leave a review saying why you don't like it so I can improve. Anyway, that's all from me. Bye UwU

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Eh the grammar is fine and the world building but I don't like the story Jdbyeetcteftftvtvfctfcfttvufyjvjfgvbvgvyvcfdcfecregret warfare exceedcurddhece

The author went really in-depth with the world building and has amazing writing skills! I really love their style and give them a huge thumbs up! I do agree where the character design can be better, but I'm a huge advocate for creating your character the way you want him to be. I will definitely continue reading, however!

The novel is okay, i feel there’s room for improvement, other than that its okay..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This story is just a bit weird. The characters are rather bland. The power system is just plain confusing. I don't really understand anything about how the MC trains, what his powers are about, or much of what he does. The sage class seems to be some sort of cultivator/summoner who fight using some weird skills. The magic class seems to be somewhat the same but just using a different energy source. I guess the mages are supposed to be more restricted but faster in training. The fight scenes seem to be some dialog with some snippets of action that really offers no picture of what is actually happening. Or it could be more easily described as several random frames of an action movie trying to portray the events. You might get an idea of the course of events but more often then not it is actually confusing. Having read through the unlocked chapters meaning 82 of them should have given me a good impression of the flow of the story and drawn me into it. With 82 chapters I should feel some desire to read further on, but in reality it was actually difficult for me to continue reading.

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a lot is copyed from naruto and dosent make sense

Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.