Doomsday: Godly System
Author: mannatbir_singh
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Author you need to work on your grammar because in just the first chapter I had a hard time reading your novel. By all means I can easily read it but how you wrote it is wrong. I like your plot so far though orphan is used alot. Don't give up pls
Please please please go through, and edit. I was only able to get half way through the first page before a headache started to set in. this story has potential, but you need to fix the vocabulary problems.