Ashen Sun
As a teenager living a fairly normal life, Aaron's life took a radical change when he was caught in a bus accident.
It was at the dying moment of his life, that he met a mysterious woman smiling down at him.
Offering him a choice to live and join 'Ashen Sun', a secret organization having an objective of eradicating the evils of the world, but underneath it all, things aren't what they portray it to be.
With the organization surrounded by mystery and danger, Aaron only had two objectives: survive and live to see his family once more.
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Hi there, just some things before starting, English is not my mother language, so probably there will be mistakes. I will be grateful if you tell them to me.
About the schedule... at the moment there isn't, but expect a chapter every 2 or 3 days. When I finally adjust my schedule I will put it here.
Another thing, some of the tags might take their time to see them, like the harem, romance and the antihero, as I intend to do some "slow" character development.
Also, I don't mind criticism as long as you are respectful and preferably constructive.
If you need it, here is my discord: Donutsaurio#2874
But enough of all that, this is my first novel so have patience with me and don't doubt about giving me advice or correcting me.
Said all that, enjoy my novel!
*The original art is not mine, if you want to take it down tell me in the comment
Hi author here with a shameless review. I want to say several things, so let's go slowly. About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker. The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end. The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be). The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it. And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless. If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us. (Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)
Great novel so far! There is a lot of story to still be developed but from everything I've read so far this is a must read for anyone that enjoys action romance novels.
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This is a lovely piece of work. Yes, I'm not so much a fan of stories like this, but I have to give praise to the author. You made me enjoy the story even from the very first chapter. Although, I got a bit confused from the switching of Povs, and there were a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but with a little editing, this story is bound to flourish. Great work.
The novel itself piqued my attention to read more because it was written rather effectively. The general point of view was the one thing that did slightly perplex me. Why does that matter? However, aside from that, it was a good novel; keep up the good job.
Its just amazing and also the story development is perfect . The author deserve the 5 stars , the more you read it you will get curious about what will happen next ....KEEP it up!!!
Although it is not my type of story, it was very well written. I read 2 chapters only and didn't hook, but it really is because I don't like this type of story. The plot has a lot of potential from what I read, and the mystery will keep most readers on the edge of their seat, waiting for more :)
I just started reading it and im already liking it ahhh 🥺🤭🚶🏻♀️
One thing I love about this novel is the way it grabs your attention from the first chapter. It makes you want to read more. It’s a good read.👌 Way to go Author.