A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

Disappointing read, its your typical human thats reincarnated into a non human being that wants to go back to being as human as possible and return to society. Ends up joining the Young justice and thats as far as i got. Also it seems like the author doesn't really research much on the stuff he's writing and im talking about how hollows evolve/work. He's just a Vasto Lord but somehow looks human, lost most of his mask when turning into a vasto lord annd the hole in his chest also filled up, even Arrancars which are above Vasto lords in term of evolution line have it but oh well.

The grammar is atrocious. Author doesn’t understand the difference between a Vasto Lorde and an Arrancar. Mc doesn’t have a hollow hole, like bruh even Arrancars and Vasto Lordes have it, why did you remove it without an explanation? In conclusion, mc is a human race simp monster main character who right after evolving into a “Vasto Lorde” as authors refers to it, which he is not. He is an Arrancar. Immediately uses garganta to rush to Earth. As soon he arrived at Earth he decides to look for Superman so he could get help getting an object which allow him to walk amongst humans.

The Biggest problem is Authors really aren't sure with powerlevels..........like sometimes MC could slaughter demons and great demons as a hollow and now struggles against peak humans and enhanced as a vasto lorde......how is that even possible.

It’s just another Young Justice fanfic. The description made me think it would be cool and unique, but as stated previously. Its just a young Justice fanfic with meh writing quality and a si hollow.

Not a good book. 5 star reviewers never read anything before this i guess. Most of info on powers are wrong making MC weaker grammar is chinese translation level and the beginning is trash.

if you are a bleach fan just don't read this

Grammar makes me want to splatter my brain matter with a 12-gauge shotgun. .

First two chapters looked promising then it went completely downhill. Typical Young Justice fic that giga boys over Batman without having anything in common with a Hollow except the power package

honestly doesn't deserve anything higher than a 3-star. the grammar is not good, the characters are quite bland, and the storytelling is on speed mode. its quite clearly the work of a beginner

pretty good so far, hopefully author doesn't ruin it with a harem...........................................................................

This story dose not make any sense peapol with no power can see him

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OMG!!!!!!!!!! Author you f***d Bleach and put it into a grinder then inside a woodchipper. Grammar is lol gave me a migraine and maybe some amnesia. Use ms word or Grammarly to fix them.

It is one of the coolest Idea i have ever encounter in the fanfiction community. And you sir definitely dont have it... I thought this would be one of the gold bearers of fanfic section of this site... I guess not... Well in your defense you didnt really take this seriously and its not even your main focus... So meh