DxD: King of Salt

I honestly was expecting more from this but is was average at best, when I saw the Yu picture and the synopsis I was actually gased but after reading the chapters I was disappointed, the chapters were practically the same just repeating how great the mc is how his relationship with the angels and god are improving without any details and somehow the mc became the second most worshiped person in heaven after god, yeah the mc is a total mary sue and the writing is sub-par at best as the paragraphs keep repeating themselves and the characters 2D as they can be. Overall not great work but good for a quick read .

Who are the Harem members? I would prefer no harem but your most likely going to continue with harem considering it's dxd.

I love it already, can you please not drop it

I, who is about to awaken, am the Weeabo Dragon who has stolen the Principle of Degeneracy from God I laugh at the “Vanilla’s” And grieve at the “NTR’s” I shall become the Otaku Dragon of Degeneracy and I shall sink you To the depths of the Filthy Degenerate Culture

I really like it the mc is good I hope more chapters for this ff

writing quality top notch anything else not so much. The start of the story was interesting but then it became like any fanfic where the mc is changed randomly in a dumb idiot for plot reasons. The mc should be smart and powerful and a self insert but the author don't have him act as such. The last 4 chapters from 13 to 17 where painful to read because of this. In my book is not worth reading at least if you plan to keep your neurons active

Mc is too merciful. Man was betrayed back to back to back and he doesn’t even punish the offenders even a little bit! Bruh, all he does is give them a headpat, I can’t even with this….

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The book had many plot holes and the author just makes stuff up along the way and it makes no sense canonically. Making OC’s for the MC for no reason, characters are stupid to make MC look “smart”, giving powers to the MC out of nowhere, the fights are annoying to read since every enemy group is like a peanut gallery just describing his attacks when we just read the fight, the MC repeats a lot of stuff and contradicts what he said the chapter before, etc. I could go on but its not worth it tbh TL:DR If u want to give this fanfic a try, turn ur brain off and just accept everything no matter how stupid and unrealistic it is.

pretty alright fic (its writing quality i mean).. its currently not focused on the anime but on godly pantheons and early universe affairs. it would need another 30 or so chapters to get into anything canon, unless the author hurried things up. also, the concept of an angel of god having a harem is just weird. the way you write the harem is also weird af. it honestly comes off as really creepy and cringe most of the time. especially with the titans and gabriel.

Great concept, original origin, interesting power set, Great MC. Well structured in the few chapters I've read. The update speed isn't the greatest but it can be overlooked. The chapters are long enough and it's still in the beginning and laying down the direction the story will follow. Great story! keep it up!

The story looks good.More updates would be better. I wonder who's in the harem? ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

The development of the story is too long to be in your own title, too clickbait to be set in the world of DXD with the stability of this novel's updates and the slow progress of the plot. In fact, I'm amazed to see all the works you've created, there are too many, none of them even touch 50 chapters. You need to be consistent as an author.