A girl born with mysterious red eyes. Hated and abandoned by her mother. She soon found a new home, but that too was taken from her. Now all she wants is REVENGE.
But not all is as it seems...
Powers are working for and against her. Will she get her revenge, or will her story be twisted and used against her? Can she find out all truths that are being hidden, will she even be able to handle those truths?
Who is she? To some, she is a loving, strong girl, meant to be protected. To others, she is a powerful weapon meant to be used, but to most, she is Devil... D for short.
Keep writing boss man, chapters is all I need muah!
I love revenge novels so I went into it excited, but then I saw it was written in first person and that excitement waned. I feel that there needed to more description and more build-up to flesh out D's character. Other than that it was kind of interesting. Keep writing!
It's an okay story, I like your idea but try to be more detailed. I'm guessing this is your first book,... nice first try I look forward to see what you do next!
Not bad for a first novel. Keep it up.[img=recommend]