Even tho there are a lot of mistakes and a lot of things could be improved upon.. I still like the story and some parts are entertaining enough..
@author I suggest you read a lot of other novel to improve your writing and also use something like chatgpt to check your spelling and grammer if a tool like MS word is not helping out
2 years ago
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Cindy_Davis_5782
Sorry but i just cant ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ……….. ………..
2 years ago
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Keith_Cline
feels like a 5 year old child wrote it....
a year ago
1
senuda_thinal
It's Extremely fast-paced but it's a fun read I hope you don't drop this and please finish this . Oh, and it's because the number of letters is not enough so now I can post I hope you finish this it's fun so...
Even tho there are a lot of mistakes and a lot of things could be improved upon.. I still like the story and some parts are entertaining enough.. @author I suggest you read a lot of other novel to improve your writing and also use something like chatgpt to check your spelling and grammer if a tool like MS word is not helping out
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feels like a 5 year old child wrote it....
It's Extremely fast-paced but it's a fun read I hope you don't drop this and please finish this . Oh, and it's because the number of letters is not enough so now I can post I hope you finish this it's fun so...