u got a patreon bro ?? this is a good story hopeful u dont give up on it
6 months ago
3
Swiftescape
This is a good novel, a hidden gem. The MC is cautious and actually thinks about the steps he makes. He isn't an arrogant fool, who will do irrational things based on his emotions. Instead he bides his time, and always ensure he makes the winning move.
His system isn't too OP either. It's exactly as it presents itself, no extra sign-in nonsense, no lottery, no hidden reward. All it does is optimize techniques. Which is a decent cheat.
The writing is a step above your normal original fic, and the MC seems to be a ruthless character willing to do anything for power with no remorse or scruples.
One thing I would like to see more of in the novel however, is more interaction between the mc and the world/characters. For the most part mc is a hermit (which isn't bad).
6 months ago
3
rev_123
although the starting chapters felt robotic and repetitive . the latest chapters are definitely better and the mc definitely feels more like a villain now and the system also isnt too op and feels good enough
need more chapters
16 days ago
1
aaron_siby
Good.
6 months ago
1
optimalracoon
Genuine and compelling worldbuilding. I love how the progression is realistic and there is a sense of peril and is not just another OP character arc! Looking forward to exploring the world outside the main sect mountain 🥷🏻
a year ago
1
Silent_wind
Very promising, I enjoyed every chapter and looking forward for more.
a year ago
1
rando123
A well-crafted world, with a promising yet not invulnerable character. The cultivation system is gradual and not overpowered, and am loving to see where this story goes!
a year ago
1
a_5983
I've seen a Demon sect MC with a similar cheat before and i quite liked the Story. So I'm optimistic about this one. So far it's Goodyear.
a year ago
1
Zenithnovels
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
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u got a patreon bro ?? this is a good story hopeful u dont give up on it
This is a good novel, a hidden gem. The MC is cautious and actually thinks about the steps he makes. He isn't an arrogant fool, who will do irrational things based on his emotions. Instead he bides his time, and always ensure he makes the winning move. His system isn't too OP either. It's exactly as it presents itself, no extra sign-in nonsense, no lottery, no hidden reward. All it does is optimize techniques. Which is a decent cheat. The writing is a step above your normal original fic, and the MC seems to be a ruthless character willing to do anything for power with no remorse or scruples. One thing I would like to see more of in the novel however, is more interaction between the mc and the world/characters. For the most part mc is a hermit (which isn't bad).
although the starting chapters felt robotic and repetitive . the latest chapters are definitely better and the mc definitely feels more like a villain now and the system also isnt too op and feels good enough need more chapters
Good.
Genuine and compelling worldbuilding. I love how the progression is realistic and there is a sense of peril and is not just another OP character arc! Looking forward to exploring the world outside the main sect mountain 🥷🏻
Very promising, I enjoyed every chapter and looking forward for more.
A well-crafted world, with a promising yet not invulnerable character. The cultivation system is gradual and not overpowered, and am loving to see where this story goes!
I've seen a Demon sect MC with a similar cheat before and i quite liked the Story. So I'm optimistic about this one. So far it's Goodyear.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
A promising start, and the system is not op.