Krea and Zi Adventures
Author: Nisha903
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Krea and Zi Adventures is a series in a tale that is filled with the whims of mystical beings. It is set in the town of Calicrow that at first, seemed bland to Zi. She hangs out with her best friend Krea, who is now realizing she is a mystical as well. Zi is a Velcro being, with parents that help protect the world from creatures that act up. Der is Zi older brother, and he is training the girls to hone their magical powers so that they can defend themselves from the attacks of others. They all went through drama and scary incidents. They have solved mysteries. This adventure is fast paced with action and funny moments that will be cherished forever!
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Well the novel can work, but there are several things that I would work on. At the reading level there are certain parts in which when reading you feel like you are stumbling, a little editing to make it a little more fluid and organized. Perhaps a hook or something impressive in a first chapter or a prologue if you don't want to modify it will help captivate the reader and motivate him. The use of the first person is very good, but don't forget that if you don't put the character's mentality or something more descriptive in context it can end up seeming a little flat. Keep up the good work and I'm sure the novel will work.
My favorite part of the work is the aesthetic. The second thing would be the leads and my third favorite is the setting. Definitely give this a go.
It is like being thrown in a battlefield without an armor and a weapon. The introduction has too much unknown info that is not properly introduced. An introduction should need as little information as possible, and have as little information as possible. You can build the world step by step and the readers have that much time to waste considering they are reading webnovels.