Mad House

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Author: TalentlessCarin_
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They said that villains were created, not born. Soo-ah and Jae were both only six when they witnessed the horrendous crime involving their mother as the victim. As the world turned its back on them, a mysterious man in a coat reached his hands, promising them help to find the culprit, but instead of salvation, the two found themselves trapped inside the cage. A cage, where rules were not meant to be broken.

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TalentlessCarin_
TalentlessCarin_

Author's review here, you can check my profile if you're interested to read my other novels.

6 months ago
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Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117

The writing is good, but the formatting could use some reform. Grammar seems to be up to standards for the most part and updates are steady. There is some conflict to keep the audience engaged. I'd like to see a bit more description in terms of the setting, background, visual sense, and whatnot. I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.

4 months ago
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