Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

call me biased but i love yandere so cinq étoiles from me

Why is he trying so hard to gain a reputation when they already know he's a king? Why does he bow to the princess all the time when that's how he presented himself to them? It's stupid.

Absolutely marvelous fanfic, it's been age for me searching for Renner as the main FML fanfic. The story in itself is also very entertaining and the only downside of this fanfic is the lack of chapters. We need moaaaarrrr

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Nice introduction but update is slow which is why most weeb find it difficult to wait so they move on without save it to their library. so overall try to update more often.

not much chapters for a proper review but the concept looks amazing hope author doesn't drop

As a story it has plenty of lore and flow, it may jump a bit weirdly and come off a bit sluggish. But my main issue is the grammar and choice of words making it feel what could be an amazing story clunky. The main character does seem to brown nose a bit to much, but otherwise a refreshing dynamic.

it's a different take on overlord story , great character interaction & story development if like Renner or Lakyus or Kingdom in general it's a good Read , 💯

The story has good plot progression , pacing, and writing. My one complaint is the grammer issues though most times you can easily fill those grammatical holes when you read.

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Overall it's a good story, but the beginning is a bit problematic, the story didn't seem to flow well in the first chapters and some strange things, like allowing a foreign knight to guard a princess, but other than that it's a good, competent story.

this is the first in a long time that i've read a work with an actual working brain of an author in this app. although there are some inconsistencies, it's hardly a big deal and can be rationalized with some little thinking. good job author-san.

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