Multiverse selection 1 Fairy Tail Karna

This is one of the most interesting Fairy Tail story that I have read in a while. Plot is mostly a FIX IT theme. MC has a ODD type of magic "Archery magic" really would like to know how this will pan out in the later chapters.

the story's good bro but you should really work on you're Grammer, paragraphs and commas it's confusing because you don't know who's talking until the end you you say "say's Karna to natsu"

Honestly speaking I'm more interested in Jason than Karna. If you wrote his adventures, it would have been a new point of interest for readers. After all rob stories are few if not nonexistent.For the record I'm only at chapter 2😆😆😆

Only on chapter 2 at the moment however i am easily pleased and its got a good intro and very interesting so 5 stars

era uma boa história até entretanto, partir do capítulo que o protagonista vai ajudar contra os demônios de Zeref, a história desandou completamente, e até o padrão de escrita das falas mudou... bem boa sorte em sua novela, mas pra mim parei aqui.

Oh my, what do we have here, no harem? A reincarnated guy who has a system that doesn't dictate everything? On top of that, you've got a second fanfic that's connects to the first.I can't wait for them to cross paths and possibly have a universe of power tournament fight. You got me

Good fairy tail fanfic and the power up is nice Ignored Fghfdfgjuffyfyfycucucufvuuguguguguguguguguggguguguguguuguugugguugugggygyfyfyffyyffyyfgyyfyfyfygygyfyfygyyfygygffhfhffhfhfhfhfhhhfhff

it's well written and all that, but his magic is so lame it hurts

The story is great, but the whole novel is in desperate need of editing. At least put some full-stops in there, or have capital letters when appropriate. Otherwise, it’s a great novel and quite a fresh take.

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