Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward

Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward

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Author: Ahmed_Riaz
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After traveling through Naruto, he became the weakest villain Mizuki.



  Fortunately, the system is activated, the apprenticeship will be returned ten thousand times.



  Granting apprentices ninjutsu, illusions, taijutsu, ninja tools, items, bloodline, etc. will receive a system refund of up to 10,000 times.



  【Ding! 】



  [You grant Naruto a bowl of miso barbecued pork ramen, triggering a thousand-fold return. 】



  [Congratulations on getting a bowl of Miso Barbecued Chakra Noodles. Eat it all and your chakra limit will increase by 1 kakashi. 】



  【Ding! 】



  [You grant Uchiha Sasuke the treading water practice method, triggering a ten thousand times return. 】



  [Congratulations on acquiring the art of stepping on the air. You can step on the air to spiral up into the sky and stay in the air for a short time. 】



  …



  According to the tradition of Naruto, the disciples are taught to kill their masters?



  It doesn't exist. In my case, the master is always better than the apprentice.

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MirageKing
MirageKing

It is like reading a hardcore mode difficulty novel where no matter how strong Mc is he always lose. Huge plot holes and bad writing. 3rd hokage wants to kill MC just bcz he thinks he is rebel ninja, i mean hokage has no proof and no grounds to so that and still he is targeting MC. MC is tbh a victim, he is just trying to survive and havent hurt anybody at all.

4 months ago
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Xavierzelaya2
Xavierzelaya2

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5 months ago
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Gratiz_
Gratiz_

Initially I liked the story, but then the translation got so bad, I had no choice but to give up. For example mc using "toilet water" to break from shisui genjutsu makes total sense... The water smelled so bad it woke him up, right? ... There are a lot similar mistranslated powers, items, names etc. The story gets worse too when mc finally defects from his village. Writing - if I could I would give a 0 Updates - 4 Story - 3 Character - nothing special 3 World background - at least background "exist", i didn't like it so 3.

3 months ago
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Samriddh_Singh
Samriddh_Singh

Just use Chatgpt for translation at this point.

2 months ago
2
XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTH

a história é mediana, mas a tradução é um lixo, mal consigo ler

2 months ago
2
MukomaTJ
MukomaTJ

I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.

5 months ago
2
wisdomseeker
wisdomseeker

Another brainrot fanfic! My favorite [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2 months ago
1
Daoist_Viking
Daoist_Viking

This is the worst Chinese fanfiction I’ve ever read. The translator don’t even give a single if about the translation yes just put it into Google translate and post it. He has not even read it a single second. The gender is complete swapped all the time. Chakra sometimes switched out with money. don’t know how that is possible the grammar are all over the place Highly recommend that you don’t read this to save you from losing brain cells.

5 days ago
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MukomaTJ
MukomaTJ

This translation needs a translation! There's enough meat on the bone to bite into, but the taste is ultimately mediocre. It'll be some extra work but after the machine pass, chuck into Grammarly and finally, find and replace the correct names for things. That would instantly elevate this work without even addressing the story!

a month ago
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FromWingsToSky
FromWingsToSky

I really like this fanfic...I've been reading it for two days straight. I was like...I really ought to look out more...this is a hidden gem. Though i prefer completed works, I will wait for this one....it's worth it! Naruto's défection was seemless and the reason was fitting. I mean it wasn't forced or complicated. Just one missing peace changed the whole picture...I sincerely support your writing style and hope that you will grace us with MORE (⁠^⁠^⁠)

2 months ago
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Britcio
Britcio

Está difícil 🤔 tiene muchos errores gramaticales y una mala traducción pero que se puede pedir de una novela China 🤷🏻‍♂️ debe haber sido un trabajo muy laborioso intentar traducirla, 😮‍💨 lo único interesante es ver como el MC hace grandes cambios en la historia original y desarrollando su propia aldea, a pesar de todo lo malo aún no me rindo en no dejar de leerla 😅

2 months ago
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Sooooyaaaaa
Sooooyaaaaa

Reveal Spoiler

3 months ago
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7Penguin_pOpsickle
7Penguin_pOpsickle

it's a really great fanfic usually in the fictions where the main character has the power similar to the main character of this fiction those fictions are not very fun and they don't even last a lot this one is different 🐧

4 months ago
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Random_Champ
Random_Champ

the story writing is so good that even if I hate the story I still read it author: i know you hate sarutobi but please don't make mc life so difficult ,try to make it more normal , your theme is really good 👍, in Naruto world strength makes everything so if his strength increases hokage or anyone will not try to make him an enemy, the plot has many similarities to cultivation novels pls change that mentality, overall really good

4 months ago
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