Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward

It is like reading a hardcore mode difficulty novel where no matter how strong Mc is he always lose. Huge plot holes and bad writing. 3rd hokage wants to kill MC just bcz he thinks he is rebel ninja, i mean hokage has no proof and no grounds to so that and still he is targeting MC. MC is tbh a victim, he is just trying to survive and havent hurt anybody at all.

This is the worst Chinese fanfiction I’ve ever read. The translator don’t even give a single if about the translation yes just put it into Google translate and post it. He has not even read it a single second. The gender is complete swapped all the time. Chakra sometimes switched out with money. don’t know how that is possible the grammar are all over the place Highly recommend that you don’t read this to save you from losing brain cells.

Initially I liked the story, but then the translation got so bad, I had no choice but to give up. For example mc using "toilet water" to break from shisui genjutsu makes total sense... The water smelled so bad it woke him up, right? ... There are a lot similar mistranslated powers, items, names etc. The story gets worse too when mc finally defects from his village. Writing - if I could I would give a 0 Updates - 4 Story - 3 Character - nothing special 3 World background - at least background "exist", i didn't like it so 3.

Just use Chatgpt for translation at this point.

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This is stupid. Inconsistent names, names not matching the characters, grammar mistakes, punctuation mistakes, stupid names like 'third generation' instead of simple 'third hokage'... and I won't even start about plot itself and the system, as this is a translation and that should be the point of a review. It looks like translation thrown it into some translation tool, copied the output without even really looking and checking for mistakes and then pasted it straight into the webnovel. Few minutes of reading and editing per chapter would place it at least at the 'readable' level and translator did not even bother to do that. I'm not really sure why would anyone post something so low quality if it isn't your own work that you want to get some advice on. Overall 2/10 at most, won't recommend anyone, no matter how much free time you have.

I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.

Reading progress ch177, if I need to describe the story at this point it would be "Boring" So much stretched plot, for some reason it grows frustrating to read due to plot not moving forward the story just goes everywhere, even the characters iq is dropped to bottom and make useless moves and that make story go everywhere, the cheat is trash at this point too which just adds to frustration.

a história é mediana, mas a tradução é um lixo, mal consigo ler

its just bad. plot holes, partial or complete mistranslations, bad grammar, annoying characters and the author doesn´t seem to do any research on naruto. one of the worst storys i have ever read

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Translation is dog water booty cheeks. Worse than most mtl translations even and that's saying something

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This translation needs a translation! There's enough meat on the bone to bite into, but the taste is ultimately mediocre. It'll be some extra work but after the machine pass, chuck into Grammarly and finally, find and replace the correct names for things. That would instantly elevate this work without even addressing the story!