Ragnarök, Eternal Tragedy.

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Author: Prince_06
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Amari Zanders. An orphan who doesn't have uncos (powers). Has always been looking forward to being part of a family but being a black kid with no uncos people have always looked at him as a curse. Will he ever meet his family? or will he die alone.

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Prince_06

Yo! It's your author here, I wanted to give an analysis based on the work I've done so far. So far there has been very few moments of action and more focus on the characters and their growth. The world building is okay, and I want to improve on it. The story is inspired by stories like God of War 1,2 and 3, but is won't be the same to be exact, just inspired. I hope you guys enjoy this journey as much as I will.

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Prince_06
Prince_06

On this comment I'll leave a critique, for anyone interested in reading the book. Grammatically it's okay, nothing bad or amazing, just okay. The story development is pretty good, and every character that is introduced during the story plays a major role in the development of the story and characters. The world background is also okay, nothing special about it, could get better during the chapters.

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