Missing Diamond

I think the story is somewhat very not bad

Here’s a 5 star!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Writing and English both barely understandable, but the concept seems nice. I'd like to see the author try again after improving their skills. Don’t give up!

reviewing for the free fp. Keep up your good work.

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...........good.........................

not my kind of book, but the writing is pretty good

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O começo da história foi um pouco confusa, então não entendi algumas coisas. Mas me parece legal e interessante.

Heyaaa here fir some free fps, the story is somewhat very not bad

reviewing just for rewards so how's everyone doing

This needs a lot of editing before publishing; seeing it from the first chapter, I already have seen most of its flaws. And I wonder if this was even reviewed before being included as an entry in this contest.

The grammar is one of the biggest flaws of this. It would greatly help the author if they put their story is a word document or grammarly or etc before publishing, because the amount of grammar mistakes makes me think they made it in under an hour an were cutting corners.