The System's Hold Over Me

The System's Hold Over Me

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Author: kevin_gauntlet
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Frizz never really had any big ambitions, yet he was never content with his life. He longed for excitement but lacked the motivation to look for one.



After recently graduating college. He squandered his opportunities, wasting his potential. An unmotivated, lazy, and boring person. Effort was an alien concept to him, preferring to idle by.



Then an opportunity arrived. A system and but that's it. No gates opening, no mystical equipment, no fantastical monsters, and no gods with schemes.



Just a cold, mechanical interface in a world drowning in mundane horrors: corruption, crime, and the soul-crushing grind of life.



For the first time, he’s wide awake and with the System's perks, he's ready to smash his dull life to the ground. However, he's not the only one playing this game…

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kevin_gauntlet
kevin_gauntlet

Biased review, since I am the author Also, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.

6 months ago
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SimmyYeah
SimmyYeah

I can tell that this is a slow burn kind of story. Not a fan but it isn't bad. From what I've read, at least the world doesn't revolve around the MC. Decent story overall. NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS.

6 months ago
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DaoistcmjAVs
DaoistcmjAVs

Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact. May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?

2 months ago
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