What if something made Naruto the dead-last that everyone perceives him to be? What if he really wasn't as weak as he appeared? The true Naruto, unleashed upon the shinobi world! AU story starts at the Konoha Invasion arc and continues from there..
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The mere fact that naruto was a trained root agent doing root mission until something went wrong and a memory seal was put in its place and that no one new he was a root agent until that point is so wrong And the four years spent in og naruto personality did not rub off and got suddenly cold is very bad character growth if that how you want to spell it and how the fuck did he convinced kurama that way when he was a child only og could do that and four years spent in gravity seals did not strengthen him instead worsen him common man he's kid even genius like kakashi, shishui etc were weak physically when they were child and they balanced it out with with skilled ninjutusu, genjutsu and IQ
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awesome. superb. mind-blowing.. that's what i wished to say.. but there is a little missing from these levels...
need more improvement, slow down the pacing.. but the action is missing something.. over all good work!