Apocalyse: Marked by Chaos

This story delivers a thrilling mix of survival, betrayal, and power struggles in a brutal apocalyptic world. It has a strong world building, intense action, and a compelling protagonist. It is a gripping read for dystopian fans. Highly recommended. Kudos to the author, job well done 👍.

Amazing book, highly recommended. Your world building and character design is well thought out. Kudos

Amazing book, Highly recommended! Surely, this will be a great run!

If you follow us, you'll know that we're not into stories like these. But here we have Missnormal, who seems to wish to delve into her writing skills. Let's see what she has to offer. So the premise goes like this: survival is a challenge where a cruel game is mandated by a lottery system that selects teenagers to battle terrifying creatures. Hunger games? Nope. Divergent? Let's chill out now. Here we have the MC, Olivia, who seems like an ordinary girl until she's betrayed by her own family and forced into the game. What's the catch, author? Oh, she has a system. Ya know, those magic translucent prompts that pop up. While only five chapters in, it's evident things can get emotional. You'll know what we mean if you understand Freya's character. Again... Hunger Games, anyone? Now, there are tons of spacing issues that need to be addressed. The grammar, while not terrible, could also be improved for smoother reading. This tells us that Missnormal is still somewhat new when it comes to writing. I'll guess that she's a young adult, which is not bad. What might stand out about this story is it somewhat tackles the notion of how to survive a society structured around the powerful versus powerless. Sort of sounds like earth!

Seems interesting; the writing is pretty good, and the characters stand out so far. It definitely reminds me *a lot* of hunger games. I hope it can live up to it!

I'm liking the character build up so far. 👏👏

All Chapter Were Great Have Amazing Plot The Writing Was also Above Average decen world building And Amazing Concept Of A Story

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This story is a thrilling blend of survival, power, and mystery. Olivia’s journey from betrayal to awakening is gripping, with high stakes, dark secrets, and unpredictable system. The tension, world building, and character growth make it an exciting read. The grammar writing is good but there is room for improvement. Highly recommended, kudos to the author 👍

Amazing story with unique writing style main characters are attractive and the plot setting hook readers for more , keep going, i add your story to my collection.

Wow amazing and interesting I recommend this novel to you

This story is suspenseful and engaging. Freya’s cold decision, the parents’ quick betrayal, and the eerie ending make it chilling. I love monster ranking! Keep it up!