The Lord of Ice and Magic

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Hello, I just want to clear some things. English is my third language and because of which I am taking help form AI. It's my first time writting anything, so while reading keep that in mind. Also if you don't like the story just don't read it. I am not making any money by writing this so I don't want any unnecessary hate. If you like it, continue to read it otherwise, goodbye!

Couldn't continue after chapter 20 or so. So far hasn't even mentioned the name Harry Potter, which seems weird when they are supposed to be in same grade. Also had ancient runes in 1st year suddenly without explanation. Very little character development. Could have better potential and maybe it gets better but won't be continuing.

The novel is not good, it had potential but the author screwed up with all that talk about his influence, it is annoying and it makes no sense for others to treat him as if he were someone very influential when there is no reason for them to do so, yes, he is a genius, but they make him look like he was from another world, they didn't even treat Harry Potter that way. The novel is boring, it repeats the same thing all the time, that if your reputation, influence, politics, uncontrolled power, that others warn you that there are people who do not see you with good eyes; This is said over and over again, which makes it repetitive and annoying.

Great job hope you finish the whole thing

AI written novel that repeats conversations over and over between chapters as if the previous one hadnt happened. I dont care that its harem, or talks on politics, but the characters feel so one dimensional its not funny. The MC is powerful and intelligent, dabbling in ancient magic, yet his friend, in her first year, gives him advice on how to use his family magic.

since its a fanfiction and the author decided to add his own twist but just to let you know readers coming here that its been 20 chapters and harry and friends arent introduced yet. Its mostly about yapping about legacy not really much anything going else. in 20 chapters i was still not able to get hold of what timeline the MC is in like for example his TWIN sister did not receive a letter but is stated to be going to hogwarts the next year like it doesnt make sense. So if youre looking for a fic that is not mainstream then go ahead.