A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment

Hey guys Author of the Novel here. I won't say this is the best novel you've ever read. So i am giving myself a good 4/5. That is what i am aiming to sustain as i keep writing this, and maybe i can even bump it up to a 5/5 later. But for now I Hope you guys enjoy the Read

Brutal apocalyptic grimdark litRPG. With zombies. And game stats ****. And n*zi elves. And character growth. And a psycho MC that becomes even more brutal. Look, it's awesome. You have to be into this kind of story, obviously, but if you are I can't recommend it enough.

So far you only expressed the dark side of the mc and he even quickly recovered... and then even tho reluctant at first he sorta got used to killing infected. So if you want to go along with the darkness thingy, you might as well make him a reject of most human settlements, you know having Ella a ruler class as a kin. and he isn't the smartest only having base stats on INT when it first started off, and with people mostly realizing analyze is the most helpful. he could get schemed on. you know instead of being just rejected, they would plot to kill him. with him having to resort to becoming an infected to survive. i mean it depends, also you never really showed how fast his regeneration is. also you really need world background like i understand not having any for now. also MC and Ella needs to be more fleshed out, we know that he forced himself to survive so he can take revenge on that bastard god and he becomes calm when in extreme rage, but other than that what? Ella is only a kid but you should portray her more of a kid with pride, but being thought by her brother to stay lowkey?... and world background, since internet prob isnt a thing maybe also SMS maybe make it like wanderers or traders. after a month or two of the infection. make it so when they trade with mc they will give gossips, ofc if you plan to let the mc in settlements he can get info maybe fairly easily after a few months atleast on nearby settlements if wanderers and traders become a thing

Dear author, add a cover, your novel is really good, but should increase the launch rate. A cover would also attract a lot more readers and a refresh rate would make readers feel motivated to give you more power stones, consequently the novel's ranking would increase, giving more visibility and consequently more readers. ADD A COVER !!! Thanks for the novel, I want more chapters and good luck.

character is an emotional being CHECK! character is not a god CHECK! character is well balanced CHECK! characters act like whats happening to them is real CHECK! author takes notes/is humble CHECK!edge of your seat story CHECK! over all great story DOUBLE CHECK!

good setup, trash MC, basically all there is to it, no worth in reading unless you want a coward, idiotic, overly emotional about everything MC that almost gets himself killed but only survives thanks to plot armour.

I love how is doing the novel has a Lot of potential would you make a rejected by other humans or something more than humans XD Thank you for this good novel

Grim dark, zombies, gore and mc with grey moral. Good plot and characters. Even when we think they are dumb, there is actually a reason behind. Totally worth reading and a nice surprise on the low rankings.

Well its a bit dark, but make a logic on it. We need to understand its human nature to be selfish and egoistic. Same as kindness, but in face of danger human tend to go dark. The story delivered really good, the flow line is smooth. Its good really. So read it guys, but if ure a baby boy that still doesnt realized the dark side of humanity, well.. U will got a ur emotion rolled here.

Sigh to be honest this one of best apocalypse novel I had ever read and apocalypse is my favourite genre. Sadly author not appreciate work much....its had been hiatus for too long. Hope author change his mind

One of the most relatable main character that i have seen in a non-romance novels. very realistic emotion and character development for a survival novel. and by this i don't mean that the story falls short in other aspects. one of the few survival/zombie novel that i have enjoyed. if anyone likes this genre i seriously recommend this novel.

Very good novel. Thoughtful world and system. Not badly written images of MC. History slowed down a bit after the city. But it seemed to start to grow again. Of the minus the lengthy and boring chapters about the world of the "immortal"(players).

I thoroughly enjoy it. I understand that the author is a new author, therefore definitely there are rooms for improvement. Some aspects to improve is to explain processes in a short,concise and understanding manner. Second, a spellcheck once in a while wouldn’t harm.

Protagonist run from asylum, story lacks interesting scenario, making yourself feel disgusting with all this crunch and munch..............