A story of a person who was reincarnated into an unusual world, where unknown things were deathly, In this world mages and creatures, were roaming around in the shadows or on view and what was unseen by you could kill you easily.
In this different world, there was a boy born into a rich family he lived a peaceful and easy life until his days were finished and his place became someone else except the name stayed the same ... DRAKE VAN HYDEN!
And this is THE JOURNEY TO THE APEX
I am rewriting and checking the first chapters from 1 to 21 and already done are 1-6.
nice story , immersive , likeable characters with charisma and an enjoyable fantasy world . i hope you don't to drop this novel , as i am enjoying reading it
Good novel author put efforts in it. However it a dark theme novel not a comedy face-slapping novel so when you read it don't expect some foolishness from mc. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
good story , the protagonist's charms are undeniable , please continue this novel , i really enjoy reading it and can't wait to read what happens next
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Ok I'll be entirely honest this HURT me to read and here's why. Writing quality 3/5 few novels are here for me on this website this FOR ME means the authors grammar and word usage is around a 6th grader which has at least tolerable grammar the only other glaring issue with this category is the the way quite a few sentences are structured it seems the author commonly use a romance language (spanish, french, Italian, ect.) structure from time to time. Stability of updates seems to be the highest at 4/5 it looks daily which earns a 3/5 but idk about extra chapters so to be nice and safe a 4/5 was given. Story development 2/5 I was VERY VERY tempted to give just a 1 BUT I only read a few chapters before dropping it, reasons for the score are #1 It was VERY rushed examples being first OUTTA NOWHERE BOOM* a system thats it why did he seem so nonchalant about it what can it do we know so little about him and the world or why he's there this one also affects character design and world background . #2 we know little at all about his family and the world around him besides, magic, vampires, and his moms dead and his dad frequents a brothel this once more affects character design and world background. Character design 1/5 all we know is some names the MC has a system and it can scan things and show stats. World background 1/5 all we know of the world is it has magical things, nobility, and a fabulous academy. If this was at least more detailed then it'd be WAY better.
I thought it will be a good novel but author didn't bother to read his own work. If he did really read it he would have known that while reading this novel you feel like 20x speed reading. like mc family, his travelling guard, library girl even he himself have didn't have a proper description or their death. If author had slightly put have some efforts this novel wasn't simply on 7 chapter. The whole material which is covered in 7 chapter, in other similar novel it take at least 30 chapter. That's all I can say about novel