A colony ship is sailing through space to an unexplored planet. Shocking data sent through by a few lucky probes launched this quest to the far side of the galaxy.
In these images, gargantuan beasts, breathtaking vistas and unbelievable flora crafted by an unknown energy filled the land. The fauna and flora had the magical ability to bend the laws we humans so believed in.
The discovery which took it from dream to action was the conjecture from scientists, that humans could also gain these powers. Thus began a new era; After Eden.
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The beginning of the story really didn't catch my eye and I even almost dropped it, but as I continued I saw improvement to it. You need to have more emotions in this, every character shows so little emotions that I feel like sometimes they didn't even have any. Other than that the work needs more creativity to it and keep it up since the novel is still young
I picked reading up awhile ago and it is a fantastic concept. The only thing I I regret is that after the chapters I've read and the author on haitus to write "outline" I've seen nothing no new review to update no notice on whether or not it's been dropped. I sincerely hope that the novel will be continued and that we will get to see the rest.
So far a very entertaining story. I read all of the available chapters in one go. I recommend this story highly. It needs a good editor but so far that hasn't detracted from the story at all in my opinion. I hope more people decide to support this author and story!
This synopsis has me interested I will shamelessly rate this 5 stars withought reading it... time to rad the first chapter 🧐... don’t dissapoint my hopes.. for I am unhindered...
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I'll start off by saying that the story is interesting. That said; the rate the chapters are posted really needs to speed up or people will leave and go onto other stories... Just a helpful suggestion.
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