Naruto In The World of Beautiful CEO

THIS IS NOT A COPY!!!! I REPEAT!! THIS IS NOT A COPY!!!!! IT'S THE SAME AUTHOR FROM FANFICTION.NET!!! HE DECIDED TO POST THIS NOVEL HERE TOO, SO PLEASE ANY OF YOU GUYS WHO REVIEWED AS 1 STAR BECAUSE YOU THINK IT'S A COPY, DELETE YOUR REVIEW OR CHANGE IT!!!

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The real story is to unique for you to have tried just to add Naruto and expected to be good. Naruto is a lil pussy everyone knows it and the main the dude is totally bad ass gives 2f about anyone so when you add Naruto it’s kind off like getting rid off Thanos in the avengers and putting Winnie the Pooh. It would of been nice if say you split it in 2 story and made your own main character in the first story and then in this one brought your Mc into this one as if he needed a break from all that happen kind off play and that way we would off been able to sort off know all his powers from the start and not have as many complains about it

Lost me on chapter 1. Many mistakes, chapter is literally the script from Beautiful CEO but with Naruto, and for some reason his rent in china is only 2 dollars usd. A bowl of his ramen probably cost more than that. Also why are you not calling Rose, Rose? Calling her, her real name is not going to change the fact you pretty much copy and pasted this chapter.

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Well in fan fiction we can understand some changes but author has totally destroyed narutocharacter aside from that in many chapters its like author has totally copied it from orignal.and even flash backs of naruto are totally wrong.if author really wanted to change whole plot of naruto in his flash backs he should hve introduced some filler charater.and about jenne........well i m speechless. All in all many people may like but its not for die hard fans of naruto.

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Good luck...? Oh god the flashback though... sorry but i dont think i can continue... but oh well! Good luck with you!! But if hinata were to be suddenly transpoted to earth then... i will immediately continue!!!

I LOVE IT!!! I WILL ACOMPANY HERE IN WEBNOVEL AND IN FANFICTION.NET YOUR NOVEL IS AMAZING!!! KEEP WITH YOUR GREAT WORK AND PLEASE I BEG YOU DON'T EVER DROP THIS!!

This story is interesting, but where are new chapters?..........,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,,,,.,...,.,.,.,,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

We need to vote this good novel, at least vote until get 100th place, why no one vote this, this is verry good novel 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

You need a better editor, the grammar and composition is horrible. It makes the story confusing at times. Get someone who can edit properly, there are many mistakes in almost every paragraph of this novel, try to get a class in grammar or you can use sentence check from Google.

goooooooooooood stoooooooooooooooooooooooooooory

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