Entering the World of HSDxD

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ANOTHER MC WHERE HE DOESNT USE HIS EXTRA STATS. System. Eh haha😂😂 TOO MANY QUEST USELESS WISHES USELESS REWARDS... GOODIE PERSONALITY 💎💎💎💎💎💎🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄..........................

I really love the way you progress the story and your writing pacing. So far, it never feels like we have missed an important scene and it doesn’t feel like there’s an excess of fluff scenes. I can’t wait for more updates, great writing!

I'm loving your novel dude, don't lose the inspiration please because is one of the best fanfics in this site, isn't rushed like almost in the site

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So far I’d say this is a solid story with a lot of powers and stuff from another anime that make it very entertaining to read. I also like where he’s taken the story so far and how he’s thinking outside the box on how he wants to get characters into his story before cannon. Overall if you like system DXD stories you’ll probably like this one as well.

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story very good you can add some things from wuxia like you get this bloodline but please don't do him instantly OP and pls no rias if it will be harem you can make some genderbend like Sirzechs, kiba, vali but not too much and don't let him be in rias peerege and don't start it 1-2 months before storyline it will be like others i think 3-5 years will be good and one more time don't let him be op from the start he can't fight all leaders on equal from the start add some more events because storyline in dxd is going too fast and all FF are going with it and you shouldn't do too much crossover 6 people can be but not more and you could take some people from khaos brigade like kuroka from vali team or jeanne de arc from hero faction but do it longer no 10-30 chapters and it's the end of the story please

Been through schooling and did a lot of TRANSFERS to since dad was military. So can relate to the stress. If you change the thinking around to writing being your relaxation time you'd be surprised at how you'd feel. Possibly add a creative writing elective lol. Then you've created all the extra time you need?

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