Douluo Dalu: Lightning God Ascension(dropped)
Rai, a young man about 19 years old was bored of waiting for the novels and fan-fiction that he read to update so he decided to take a walk outside since it's a sunny day. Right when he got outside, lightning struck him and he die. His last thought were 'Where the F*** did that lightning comes from.'
I been thinking, I read a lot of fanfic so I should be good at writing them, that how it works right?
Anyway, after reading for a while I decided to write one of my own while waiting for other to update their. This will my try at writing a fic so any comments on how to improve or if you spot any spelling error will be appreciated.
I do not own Douluo dalu or any character form said novel. This is for entertainment only. I also don't own this picture.
If anyone want to continue this fanfic, be my guest. I already upload what will happen but change it if you want. If one of you want to continue this fanfic, email me with the email I give before or put a comment on the last chapter so I can give you a shout out.
plz stop this review spamming, all the authors on this site are sacrificing there time and are propably crashing their heads on the desk, to provide entertainment for us readers. sssoooooo please show some respect you losers :(
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This is a good story although it seems somewhat awkward at times. The MC is interesting with both his fighting style as well as his personality. He contributes and doesn't just do everything Tang San says but he doesn't oppose him without good reason. I'd say the author did a good job of not making him a wallflower. There isn't very much development on side character's strength and usefulness but the story isn't very long yet so 5 stars. At the very least, their personalities aren't 2 dimensional. The world is based off of Douluo Dalu so 5 stars. :3 Anyway the English could be a bit better but it's only the author forgetting things like ed, and s on the end of words so it doesn't take too much away from the story. 4 stars. As for the story development it's just 4 stars but I wouldn't worry about it too much as the story is pretty short and it hasn't got to the interesting parts of Douluo Dalu. It's a nice novel but it could be better if the author studied up a little on English and used more descriptive words. All said and done I enjoyed it.
Just another reader here helping author fight agaist review spammer. I don't get it why do people have to get so low attacking other poeple just fo get their novel a better chance. And to put it on top they spam review a fan-fiction novel which according to the webnovel will never get any contract due to copyright policy.
Great fan pic keep going and plz don't drop. and y is there so many fake 1* reviews? who the hell did u piss off haha anyways thanks for writing this and don't let it get to you =)
I will just give it five star, just because it is a lot better than most novels on this site. At least he have some originality, it sure isn't best work on the platform, but at least it is readable. You won't have a desire to throw up from the first few chapters.
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