I died at the age of 20, and one minute after I am a baby in the world of Harry Potter in 1989. My name is Alexander and I am now a wizard,

Harry Potter : Second Chance as a Wizard (Dropped)

This story is trash no offense author but everything goes mc way he reads a book about the most powerful creature hydra 2 peregraft later a fucking egg is in his bush( but we where told that mc cant go outside) and behold its a hydra egg a creature that was not seen for 400 years is somehow right there in his yard( wtf bull**** is this) 1 chapter later its mc 7th birthday again same bul**** his mother is somehow from a powerfull family clan and leaves him with her family heirloom that has OP abilitys ( i really cant take this tipe of bull****) he puts on the heirloom and now we hear a voice telling him "master can i come out" somehow the hydra thinks of mc as master wow that fucking plot again if hydra is the most fearsome and powerful beast do ypu really think it would call a stupid human master let me guess next chapter we find out that mc has special aura tat letd magical beast love him yea!!! Totally not complete bull**** from this we know that nothing will go wrong when its about this mc i dont even need to read the story and i know how it will end. Soo this story is complete trash just like my grammar 😂😂

Interesting, now you just need to upload constantly and explain the world properly, until later chapters I can’t say anything else, but that you got my interest.

A very great story with a very great author ( I know him personally :D )

Enough with jokes, I would like to thank in advance all of the reader who will share their thoughts about my story

I’m enjoying it. Every story has flaws but I’m thankful having something new to read and anticipate what’s to come. Best of luck author and keep at it :)

Quite frankly this story feels like the author is just constantly force feeding the plot making everything go the way of the mc sorry but it’s just to forces for me to enjoy it

It was a good and interesting story... I'm hoping for more chapters... Please, author updates for more and don't drop this... The male lead really change Neville's life... Hoping for more and more updates...

So, the Harry Potter universe exists in text and film. Both are considered canon to an extent. The greater potterverse as created by fans, and Rowling herself consists of many magical things. When writing a story, you build a world. When you write fanfiction, you are borrowing the elements of another world or writing into that world. This story seems to be an alternate universe Harry Potter world where friendships are only about convenience. Family ties exist to make the MC capable of getting whatever they want. Oh not to forget plot armor so thick that Voldemort would get crushed by a fart before he could drain his first unicorn. Normally, I try to support the positive, but I couldn't really find any here other than word count. I get having favorite characters, and trying to represent elements of the world in stories, but aspects of this story just straight **** on the original story by glossing over any potential element that could improve it by skipping time. Flash back is an over used trope (in general not necessarily this story) that just glosses over how people can do/ be things that wouldn't work. In addition the RoR can be used to access the room of many things. Maybe the MC could accio a time turner there but expecting his father to be under his thumb and just send him one? No. With all this, I'm trying to not insult the author. I tried to read it hoping that the story would improve but it did not. I don't think it was worth reading. 