People were telling Midoriya he was useless, that he should give up, and to think realistically. Years of bullying he hits rock bottom. Attempting to take his life in a dark alleyway, a certain warp gate villain finds him, on the verge of death.
"The greatest pleasure in life is doing what people say you can't do." —Joker
I like the idea if what you were going with but sometimes when your writing I feel like you get sidetracked and talk about side characters more than the mc. I also think that you should put more focus into the L.O.V and who they are.