Soldier Zero

Just a warning to any future readers; it's got pretty bad NTR. If you can ignore the NTR and the shaky grammar (especially the dialogue), you've got yourself a pretty good read. Author I suggest you don't put back and forth dialogue in a single paragraph and you need to work on portraying emotions too. All the dialogue just seems super flat. Unfortunately my heart is too weak for this NTR so I'm out but good luck.

NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!! MC'S GIRLFRIEND GOES AROUND SCREWING OTHER PEOPLE!!

New rating after the first one. The author doesn’t listen to his readers and let’s the MC get NTR lol and then out of nowhere instead of him beating the sh*t/killing the person who cheated on him without Felicia but OUT OF NOWHERE says that she is “brainwashed” or “lost her memories” so if you like your MC to get NTRed then by all means read this novel from an author that doesn’t listen to his readers lol it’s pathetic

NTR. at least warn people that there is going to be ntr later in the story and then you try and save your her ass by saying her memory’s are sealed, nah fam, I’m good. *proceeds to kill her*.

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All in all not really outstanding but nontheless a good read. I like the world building and Shura adds a lot of different types of Gods and cultures. His love interest tho is one of the parts in the story im not too sure i like. Well first she is a Damsel in distress that needs to be rescued. She got 'abducted' or thrown? not sure wich word is more fitting into the DC verse and the first thing she does is cheat on the MC with Wonder Woman. She did state that she was Bi, but still. Her cheating on him so quickly does leave a bad taste in my mouth and i hope hes not just gonna ignore it or even support it. NTR is always a bad sign in a relationship and i dont think many people could live with it.

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NTR is over with me, I don't know if I'll keep reading this ... Maybe I will read a little more to see how the author will deal with this situation, but this NTR was very random. I think it leaves anyone with a bad taste in their mouth and my heart is too weak for that.

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The hell wrong with you author, do you have a NTR fetish and what the hell kind if punishment was that, the MC should just leave her, making it turn that she lost her memories is a valid reason for cheating is stupid and even worse you're bringing them back together like nothing really happened and you want diana to be with steve rogers after she NTR MC, might as well let her fall for him and then make it that some god ther turn peggy to her youth so steve ditch diana and go back to her, that will good enough punishment for her and for felicia just dump her.......... currently you are ruining the story yourself

The story has mediocre grammar and the story is also pretty damn bad, mc personality is pretty **** too and the worst part of the story is that it has plenty of ntr First at ch21 and then later on again, it's like author has a fetish for it, so warning for that