Marvel: Loki

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well written fan-fic. its kind of annoying, reading most fics on this sight with a horrendous amount of broken English, that causes me to lose chromosomes by the seconds. this fic is like a breath of fresh air. sure there are few mistakes here and there, but nothing is perfect story & character development pace is good, with few plot holes which are clearly filled with a change of pace in the story. e.g: im pretty sure loki and thor had little to no information on hela, because she was born when odin was first starting out his campaign as king and conquering the nine realms, once this time was finishing she was locked away and odin picked up loki because he still did not have a son, untill like a couple of years later after loki was 7-9 or something similar but as we all know, this is a fan-fic and our author can change the story however he wants, as long as he keeps it relevant to the mcu universe keep up the good work

Loki marvel 5 🌟 And please don't make sif sad

5 Star for the writing quality, stability of updating and story development, 5 Star for the last two too but it's because it's the Marvel Univers and character

MAFUKER..THIS SHIT DOPE.....all I ask is that Loki does his **** alone and is OP..godlike...and add some fluff and romance cause why not...also dont separate lovers or you know no rape/angst/tragedy.. **..the people have spoken..Loki x hela

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It’s very nice, especially for a fanfic with three chapters. I for one love marvel and the characters Loki, so seeing a more powerful and morally good Loki is refreshing. I implore you to at least try it, it’s only a bit of your time of your years of life, so just try it~~😁👍

Love it. Story is dope and I wished you continued it. I’m sad that the story is either dropped or in hiatus. I hope you get back into it.

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👍 G R E A T F A N F I C T I O N Way better writing quality than most

Overall High rating due to Writing quality being impeccable. As far as story development goes, I give it a 2 currently at chapter 6. that's about 30k or more words so its worth a review. You may be wondering why I have rated the story's development so low? Personally, as I read, I expected more from the MC. I understand that was perhaps silly of me, but considering his thought processes throughout the first few chapters I expected better decision making. Instead I find that while he is supposedly not the being he became, he instead became worse in a way. Instead of Jealousy, he is narcissistic, practically asexual, and completely neglectful of all the teachings he had likely recieved during his several centuries of life. TLDR; Just not happy with the current development. Wished it had diverged centuries ago.

Pretty good novell................ Pretty good novell................ Pretty good novell................ Pretty good novell................ Pretty good novell................ Also pls do hela x loki..