it is good so far i will see how the story progress, the characters are understandably.
And the story progress is not to fast right now after 13 charapers.
the spelling and grammar have been good enough that i have not had eny problem with reading the story
5 years ago
1
LiveMan
Absolutely love this fic. The mc is an oc and is not reincarnated/transmigrated/time traveler. The author brings in an interesting original character with a tragic past. Not the edgy type of tragic but the type that makes him unable to trust. All of the characters are shown to be able to grow and develop. Overall, I love the fic and hope the author continues.
Also, the chapters are long.
5 years ago
1
VuckLWolf
Hidden gem. Great character development. Amazing piece of work I hope you keep it up.
5 years ago
1
Hazielr
A ff really good.. some deep concepts and nice pacing.. I am looking forward on this one! I am looking forward on this one! I am looking forward on this one!
It is definitely an original take on the Naruto verse. It's an interesting read to non-naruto fans as well. I would reccomend to those who are looking for a quick read. Great novel author san
So far it's really a good read. I recommend people try it.......................................................................................
5 years ago
0
samsara
HahahahahA, I wasn't expecting a great fanfiction like this. It's organised and when you start reading, you keep asking for more. Quality writing, well developed.....5star is the minimum requirement for rating.
5 years ago
0
chimcybergooble
I really like this story not to sttrong of a character but not useless and someone who can use his brains in the place of running straight into battle
5 years ago
0
the_game01234567
Just keep updating.... i am going to break my common rule just this once of only posting a review once the novel reaches at least 25 chapters. You better do this novel good author.
5 years ago
0
SAM_NZ_1127
A decent and unique Naruto fanfic. A must read if you are Naruto fan and like reading its fan factions. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
5 years ago
0
Nickomata
Looking foward for more in the future really loving this fanfic so far and cant wait for the next update keep up the good work author 🌸<(^_^)>🌸
it is good so far i will see how the story progress, the characters are understandably. And the story progress is not to fast right now after 13 charapers. the spelling and grammar have been good enough that i have not had eny problem with reading the story
Absolutely love this fic. The mc is an oc and is not reincarnated/transmigrated/time traveler. The author brings in an interesting original character with a tragic past. Not the edgy type of tragic but the type that makes him unable to trust. All of the characters are shown to be able to grow and develop. Overall, I love the fic and hope the author continues. Also, the chapters are long.
Hidden gem. Great character development. Amazing piece of work I hope you keep it up.
A ff really good.. some deep concepts and nice pacing.. I am looking forward on this one! I am looking forward on this one! I am looking forward on this one!
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It is definitely an original take on the Naruto verse. It's an interesting read to non-naruto fans as well. I would reccomend to those who are looking for a quick read. Great novel author san
Awesome Novel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So far it's really a good read. I recommend people try it.......................................................................................
HahahahahA, I wasn't expecting a great fanfiction like this. It's organised and when you start reading, you keep asking for more. Quality writing, well developed.....5star is the minimum requirement for rating.
I really like this story not to sttrong of a character but not useless and someone who can use his brains in the place of running straight into battle
Just keep updating.... i am going to break my common rule just this once of only posting a review once the novel reaches at least 25 chapters. You better do this novel good author.
A decent and unique Naruto fanfic. A must read if you are Naruto fan and like reading its fan factions. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Looking foward for more in the future really loving this fanfic so far and cant wait for the next update keep up the good work author 🌸<(^_^)>🌸