When the world turned into a game where the strong devour the weak. What will our protagonist do?.
Because I am starting to take this a little bit seriously. I will change this synopsis.
My grammar isn't the best.
I am trying to fix it bit by bit so bear with me and if I didn't succeed well... that it.
I will mostly update one chapter by day... hopefully.
This my first story. So, I am just doing my best and nothing more.
I don't own anything. I just write for fun and because I am bored.
Hello guys here the author shamelessly rating my novel 5 stars. First, I want to say thank you guys for all the support and the encouragement. This is my first time writing a novel, you can say this was just a whim from me to write this. Honestly, I wasn't even taking it seriously to write this then I started to see comments and thought. I will continue writing this. I am new author so you will find lot of mistakes here and there especially plot holes or grammar. My grammar isn't perfect because English isn't my first language so what I am doing is just making my novel understandable. So, I am putting this review here. You can give me any advice to make this novel better. Say whatever you thinks or what you didn't like about the novel because it will be a great help for me to make this novel better. Thank you guys again for the support and I hope you all a great time.
I'd say it is very similar to Reincarnation Paradise but RP becomes dull after sometime and this one is really good, atleast so far, mc is smart, I suppose somewhat an anti-hero? Has a stand arrow and Dirty Deads Done Dirt Cheap as a stand. Overall very well-written
Writing quality is **** the story has a really good concept but it’s really hard to enjoy something you’re reading when you’re cringing every 30sec because of how badly things are being written.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😟😟😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Ignore the lack lustre synopsis as this novcel is the real deal. A few mistakes here and there bit they were barely noticeable and still understandable. Mc is Manipulative, Smart, a bit cliche but that was because of his split personality. I wholeheartedly recommend this.
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Not going to lie, i started reading this novel only because i had nothing better to do, but i got hooked on this book and ended up binge readind it. Even through sometimes i just couldn't understand some sentences i overall had fun reading it.
Absolutely amazing, the book is truly enjoyable to read. Author you did a terrific job
Had to check the title a few times to make sure it was not the same (translation) fanfic I've been reading. Anyways it's well written. Keep up the good work! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~! Best of luck~!
A really really good story. I look forward to reading new chapters every day . Thanks for such an awesome story Usjejs Shsjsjj Shshsjj Shhsjssj Hshssjjsj Hzhsjsksj Hzhsjsjssj
Very good, please don't drop!
Very nice story to read. There is unfortunately one major problem and that is, the grammar. Author, I would suggest that you copy and paste all of your chapters into a program like grammarly. It will evolve your writing and you will have a much higher fan base. You might even be able to get to the top 3 in the rankings. Hope this suggestion helps. Keep up the good work!
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10/10 for doing my favorite fanfic novel illimitable til death
Brilliant story !!! Mc intelligent / strategic / semi-op? Akashi is a very good character, **** the system. Well ... what I hope is that he avenges himself on his family, is he going to have romance?