Konrad’s adventures in the multiverse. Vol 1

Stories amazing as ****. its DOPE.... like its well written and has a decent plot and it inst the sad **** ,,,,now why would something amazing ever deserve a single star...stupidity..thats why.. C7, MC tells hermione, a child, barely 5... that he is a magician and a re- incarnated dude....like the hell?...I dont care how amazing child is, no way should MC tell a child he is magic, and reincarnation is off limits...at best, at best lovers, thats it...no one else..so yah...she donst have the mentality to grasp the context of what MC is saying...plus so far MC is an ***** in a child,,the **** dosnt he have the brains to understand his stupidity...should've kept magic secret till 10 yrs or something...and his reincarnation ****, absolutely off limits this stupid **** ****ed it up...like shes a kid,.....she dosnt understand secrets,,,its stupid...plus, no matter how smart a child is,,,,wizard or not...noo way in hell can they read books about atoms and ****.. 5 or 6 yrs aint enough to understand scientific concepts...so author bru,,,,a suggestion, re-write c7 and c6...

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The story is well written. Its just a shame that its all child smut. I find it disturbing that what I suspect is an *****, is writing ecchi child stuff and feels the strong need to frequently point out their ages in such scenes. There are also indicators that the story will head into beastiality as well. The terrible thing is that the story is well written plot wise, and without the abundant child smut would actually be a good read...

This is a great start would love if you continue writing the story. This is a light story and a relaxing read with an intriguing premise as not a grimdark type fics that seem to populate the fanfiction gerne.

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

amazing story found my self smiling through out the story. please don't drop can't wait for tournament arc. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Wow. Reading all the chapters of this story. The chapters are good. The update is consistent. The story is good. And the world building is also great. I can't wait to read more.

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Solo diré que gran historia y nunca se me hubiera ocurrido una idea como esta, en verdad este tipo es un genio. Una gran historia, y giro inesperado al final.

a crackish hp fic, decent enough story-line, could be serious with some effort and twists but overall a story with good ideas and a proper mix of drama/dialogue and storytelling/narrative.

Overall Rating: Average at best. Well written with less to no grammatical errors. Cons (Not my cup of tea): Story development & MC progression is a bit lame as it still carries the "kid/child" genre the cannon has. It mainly focuses on romance & tons of researches which kinda suck as it only caters on teens or below adult level IQ & EQ. Still kudos to author-san for writing this fanfic, it's just not to my expectations.

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