[ON BREAK. WILL OFFICIALLY BE BACK BY FEBRUARY]
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[THIS BOOK IS NOT SLOW BURN]
Alexander is the country's most powerful businessman. Sabrina is the rising star of her generation.
When Alexander met Sabrina, it was love at first sight. He was immediately captivated by her humble personality and her smiles. Wanting her for himself, he did things to make her fall for him.
Both Sabrina and Alexander had a painful past. Sabrina was left by her long time boyfriend, Jacob and Alexander had his mom killed right in front of him when he was 7.
Their pasts will come haunt them in the future along with other problems that will arise on the way.
Will their love for each other be enough to overcome the obstacles that awaits them?
Or giving up will be the best option?
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[EXCERPT]
"Stay there! D-Don't come near me!" she said, but it was too late. Alexander had already trapped her between his arms. His hands on both sides of her head.
"Look at you denying, so cute," he teased her and Sabrina's face turned redder.
"What do you want Alexander!?" she complained, facing side ways, he was being too close!
"Simple," he held Sabrina's chin and turned her face towards him, "Tell me you like me," he said while looking straight into her eyes.
"Who likes you? Let me go!" she said while trying to push him, but he was too strong for her.
"Just tell me if you want to hold my chest," he leaned closer to her ear, "I'm more than willing to let you touch me," he whispered.
"You! You're corrupted!" Sabrina accused him then threw punches at his chest. Alexander grabbed both her wrists and pinned it on both sides of her head.
"I'm only like this with you, don't worry," he smiled at her, "Now where were we? Oh right! You're confession," he said.
"But I have nothing to confess!" Sabrina still tried to escape from this situation.
"One more denial Sabrina and you know what's next, I'll count one to ten," he threatened her. He was really eager to hear it.
"One,"
"Two,"
"Hey! I already said I don't have anything to confess!"
"Three,"
"Alexander let me go!"
"Four,"
"Are you freaking serious!?" Sabrina raised her tone.
"Damn serious Sabrina, Six," Alexander continued to count.
"Hey there's still number five!"
"Eight,"
"Alexander!"
"Nine,"
"Fine! Fine! I like you!" she blurted out, turning her head down due to embarrassment.
Then suddenly she felt a hand cover the back of her neck and pull her.
She felt Alexander's lips on hers.
Alexander couldn't control himself anymore. The past 2 days he was away, Sabrina was the only person on his mind. He missed her so much.
Yes, call him crazy, but it was how he felt.
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Okay in chapter 13 i said I'd be back to review again so here I am Writing quality (4/5): It's good, understandable and minimal grammatical errors. There are just some typographical error, but bearable. I think you should do some proof reading first before you release the chapter. Stability of update (5/5): I have nothing to say here as author always update daily. Story Development (5/5): In all honesty, I'm not into the courting process, if you wanna date, just date and not be hard to get. The development between Alexander and Sabrina is just right for me (PERSONAL PREFERENCE) it's not too pushy nor awkward. The chemistry between then is just so good! Never awkward. And also I love how this story is different from other romance stories here on WN. Character design (5/5): I love how the author plays with the emotion of the readers, it's so on point. Like you will really feel the hatred and love for a character. For example Jacob, I felt pity for that man but felt disgust instantly. You get my point? But yeah, please don't add anymore characters for now as it may get messy, I like how it is right now. World Background (5/5): Author provides necessary descriptions for each setting, its not hard to imagine the place they are in. So i gave 5 stars. Looking forward for more. I want dem cute scenes between Sabrina and Alexander. Also from Kenzie and Grey. This is a good book 👍 Hope you guys enjoy it as how I enjoyed reading it 👌
Reveal Spoiler
Hi guys, Author here! So I just want to give you guys a heads up on what to expect from this novel. (sorry for the shameless review) 1. The book might contain SOME (SOME) R-18 scenes, so if you're a pure minded person or you're not into mature content, you can choose to skip them while reading or just not read the book at all. 2. The development between the FL and ML is fast paced. So if you're into the traditional stuff, like the woman should be hard to get or something, this may not be the book for you. 3. ML is very possessive and bossy in the first chapters. May cause some trigger to others. I'm reminding you already in advance. 4. In the future chapters, there might be major misunderstandings between the ML and FL, so if you guys are not into those stuff, please don't read the book. 5. Update is daily so don't worry :) - (most likely 1-2 chapters per day) If you have questions, feel free to ask and I'm going to answer all of them <3 I hope you enjoy the book! Happy reading!
For a starter writer I must say the building of this story was well thought, It kinda got my interest immediately and i can't wait on how this story will go on
interesting start hmm especially with her story, i'm liking grey so far haha that poor assistant. over all its not that bad. can't wait for the upcoming chapters
i loved the way how Alex got back to that fat CEO HAHAHA what dirt? well well well u don't sayyyyyyy. but yeaaah thanks for updating diligently up up up!! keep up the good work!
honestly this story is kinda good, i mean its just starting and it got good content already. First 7 chapters and there already so much events. It's not like those other stories that starts with too much blahblahs. Will be waiting for more!
i'm liking how things are going right now. but heeey author! why do I feel like everything is sailing smoothly right now, i feel like there will be a major misunderstanding later on i'm scared.
Authornim can u save Daniel for me? Ughhh tanned man! anywayssss i love how sarcastic and bossy Alexander is. I feel like he'll be one unpredictable character later. so yeah i'm looking forward to this!
alexander's sarcasm is a thing. author updates fast. interesting story. interesting start. flow of story is good. makes you wonder what's next. okay i'm rooting for this
giving this a 5 star rating because it caught my attention immediately. good start and flow. but might change my rating if it gets boring half way.
can i just say that this book is super cute? is that even a way to compliment a book? i dunno i'm lost. eneweee author bog thumbs up! love story!
big fat five star rating for this author! this story is absolutely cute, got me wailing soo much! i feel like this novel is gonna be successful. Looking forward for more!
I love this book so far! I can def see the potential in this book! Keep it up and another helpful tip is to update frequently (yes am I hypocrite since I don’t do that but anyways 😂) and just have fun when writing! Don’t do it bc of other people or something else, it turns into an obligation rather than doing it bc you love writing or for fun. Anyways good job 💕
of course we all love a fast updating author don't we? so far this story is going good. I love how the characters are slowly being built. I don't know if I'm even saying the right things 😂