Multi-Dimension Harem Adventure

Well. This story could be great, but in the end, it's just a harem fanfic with uninteresting main characters, a ton of cliche and easiest power struggle out of there. I liked how thoughtful you was in power description. I liked how you make use of them I liked characters for harem *. I don't like how easily he gets them. I mean make them brainwashed lovers ,and mc getting all white of how he dislike it, but still need they powers ....yeah, I cringed hard, but at least it's was glossed over fast. And then there is story itself and mc. Why he doing anything he does ? Because it's best option? Yeah, sure. That's the problem, I don't feel like mc have more in him, than just conviniet function to make good decisions. The same with his character changes*, when he introduced flames, I was already iffy. But when he reminded of sky flames...i just realized how deep the rabbit hole. Either way, story don't have much tension or interesting moments. P. S. When you go in dxd and create harem only from the girls you summoned from another world(and Valerie, I dropped it) ....what? There is no good girls in dxd?

Overall an interesting work with one major issue. The only issue is that the Author does not know how to use tenses. In other words, the author doesn't know to add "ed" to the end of verbs describing past events, or add "s" to the end of words that are plural. Overall an issue that could easily be fixed just by pasting the story into word.

One of the rare Dxd fics that doesn't come across as a retread of canon. Also the mc does not go overboard with summons or harem so it is fairly easy to keep track of all the characters.

Awesome......................................................................... Needs stability............................................

The grammar is truly atrocious and it's not a very imaginative story. Mostly just the grammar though.

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I don't know what to say but this is a great story,........................................................................................................ ............... ..... ................................. .............

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Germ, this book is shiny germ in this grey world.. Please.. Please... Please.... Please, dont drop this diamond.. Although iits still rough, but after time been refined it will shine like a moon in the darkest night...

a rare fanfic where the mc is not the strongest or the most op

Mengecawakan 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

is it possible for small snippets/ a sequel where they visit the worlds where the companions are summoned frm? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]