Juan is a noble warrior, willing to die for the Levander city. Follow his journey of becoming a master at the art of fighting and be a part of all the adventures he takes.
Quite interesting story, keeps you on the edge of your seat. Though there were some things which needed more elaboration. Otherwise it was an amazing book with likeable characters and cliffhanger story. I highly recommend it to anyone who is interested in crime fiction.
4 years ago
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Ansh_Maini
Lol I myself rated the book. I mean who doesn't want their book to get good reviews 😜. Anyway this is the first part of this story going. I am planning to make a cinematic universe through it. In the later parts there will be more action more dramaand also more protagonists.
4 years ago
2
Pink_poweranger
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4 years ago
2
AtsukiJoou
I liked the overall concept of the story.
The plot is kept simple, that is, about our newly hired MC and the mystery behind the death of a certain character.
But maybe it's just me still, I feel like the story is a bit rushed?
I felt like I was pushed into the middle of the story and just when I thought I can pause and enjoy the flow, it suddenly changed...
I hope that Author-san can pace the story well because it is otherwise a good story~
Keep up the good work~
4 years ago
2
hartpeler
semi-historical work with nicely written storyline. definitely 10/10,
but a small issue occurred on this work is, it lacked the attention of detail.
Historical genre should have strong attention of detail to made it looks real.
Overall, it's a 9.5/10 book you should read! Looking forward to your future chapters author!
4 years ago
2
mamamamay
i think there are some things that need more extrapolation here and there and there is truly a lot of room for improvement but overall it's nice!
4 years ago
2
Dimple_Maini
Amazing story. I appreciate the unpredictability of the book unlike other books present on this platform. The storytelling is also somewhat great. I am having a great time reading it and can not wait for the next chapters
4 years ago
2
rebecca_ringdomsto
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
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Quite interesting story, keeps you on the edge of your seat. Though there were some things which needed more elaboration. Otherwise it was an amazing book with likeable characters and cliffhanger story. I highly recommend it to anyone who is interested in crime fiction.
Lol I myself rated the book. I mean who doesn't want their book to get good reviews 😜. Anyway this is the first part of this story going. I am planning to make a cinematic universe through it. In the later parts there will be more action more dramaand also more protagonists.
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I liked the overall concept of the story. The plot is kept simple, that is, about our newly hired MC and the mystery behind the death of a certain character. But maybe it's just me still, I feel like the story is a bit rushed? I felt like I was pushed into the middle of the story and just when I thought I can pause and enjoy the flow, it suddenly changed... I hope that Author-san can pace the story well because it is otherwise a good story~ Keep up the good work~
semi-historical work with nicely written storyline. definitely 10/10, but a small issue occurred on this work is, it lacked the attention of detail. Historical genre should have strong attention of detail to made it looks real. Overall, it's a 9.5/10 book you should read! Looking forward to your future chapters author!
i think there are some things that need more extrapolation here and there and there is truly a lot of room for improvement but overall it's nice!
Amazing story. I appreciate the unpredictability of the book unlike other books present on this platform. The storytelling is also somewhat great. I am having a great time reading it and can not wait for the next chapters
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.