I really don’t know what to say only that fanfic is pretty good and interesting.
4 years ago
4
Thomas_Milstead
good book nice writing nice style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4 years ago
3
taiik
English is not my first language This is a typical story of a great idea but a novice writer who doesn’t know what to do haku is a ninja genius who although he didn’t reach Hashirama level would undoubtedly be a kage level power and see this story making a person with such a person simple to inherit his power is discouraging instead of saying that he is the haku it is better to say that he is a ninja of the yuki clan (clan of the haku) random without genius or personality she simply accepts the things that happen to her in 12 episodes the thing more "exciting" was a kick that she gave to bakugo I can't even say it is a story not of combat but of romance because there isn't, episode 9 "a friend of the mother arrives" episode 10 "without explanation they moved from house to flame the face of father "a shame to the name of haku the ninja genius of the ice.
(PT-BR)inglês não é minha primeira lingua
Essa é uma história típica de uma ótima ideia mas um escritor novato que não sabe o que faz haku é um ninja gênio que embora não chegasse ao nivel Hashirama sem duvida seria uma potência de nível kage e ver essa história fazendo uma pessoa com uma pessoa tão simples herdar seu poder é desanimador em vez de falar que ele é o haku é melhor falar que ele é um ninja do clã yuki(clã do haku) aleatório sem genialidade ou personalidade ela simplesmente aceita as coisas que acontecem com ela em 12 episidios a coisa mais "emocionante" foi um chute que ela deu no bakugo não da nem pra falar que é uma história não de combate mas de romance porque nao tem, episódio 9 "chega um amigo da mãe" episódio 10 "sem explicação mudaram de casa ate chama o cara de pai" uma vergonha ao nome de haku o ninja genio do gelo
4 years ago
2
interesting_knight
The only thing I didn't like is he couldn't be a trap. That's all and that's it. Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ
4 years ago
1
thehater
goodjob
4 years ago
1
Foxes_R_Cool
I honestly enjoy the book from what i read so far. Its missing some plot points and some minit grammar issues but other than that, its pretty well made.
4 years ago
1
Reiya9
Super boring amd badly written novel. nothing is explained and it’s so monotone.
It is very good the quality of writing development of the history of the world, especially for me, who love MHA but it takes a long time to launch a new chapter, already 2 months ago
The grammar is terrible. The words parasites are found in almost every paragraph. And most importantly, it pisses me off that there are SEVERAL paragraphs IN A ROW that begin with the word "Then". Well, so, it seems interesting, the plot is not complicated and there are no jumps from topic to another
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I really don’t know what to say only that fanfic is pretty good and interesting.
good book nice writing nice style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
English is not my first language This is a typical story of a great idea but a novice writer who doesn’t know what to do haku is a ninja genius who although he didn’t reach Hashirama level would undoubtedly be a kage level power and see this story making a person with such a person simple to inherit his power is discouraging instead of saying that he is the haku it is better to say that he is a ninja of the yuki clan (clan of the haku) random without genius or personality she simply accepts the things that happen to her in 12 episodes the thing more "exciting" was a kick that she gave to bakugo I can't even say it is a story not of combat but of romance because there isn't, episode 9 "a friend of the mother arrives" episode 10 "without explanation they moved from house to flame the face of father "a shame to the name of haku the ninja genius of the ice. (PT-BR)inglês não é minha primeira lingua Essa é uma história típica de uma ótima ideia mas um escritor novato que não sabe o que faz haku é um ninja gênio que embora não chegasse ao nivel Hashirama sem duvida seria uma potência de nível kage e ver essa história fazendo uma pessoa com uma pessoa tão simples herdar seu poder é desanimador em vez de falar que ele é o haku é melhor falar que ele é um ninja do clã yuki(clã do haku) aleatório sem genialidade ou personalidade ela simplesmente aceita as coisas que acontecem com ela em 12 episidios a coisa mais "emocionante" foi um chute que ela deu no bakugo não da nem pra falar que é uma história não de combate mas de romance porque nao tem, episódio 9 "chega um amigo da mãe" episódio 10 "sem explicação mudaram de casa ate chama o cara de pai" uma vergonha ao nome de haku o ninja genio do gelo
The only thing I didn't like is he couldn't be a trap. That's all and that's it. Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ Fìĺĺèŕ
goodjob
I honestly enjoy the book from what i read so far. Its missing some plot points and some minit grammar issues but other than that, its pretty well made.
Super boring amd badly written novel. nothing is explained and it’s so monotone.
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It is very good the quality of writing development of the history of the world, especially for me, who love MHA but it takes a long time to launch a new chapter, already 2 months ago
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The grammar is terrible. The words parasites are found in almost every paragraph. And most importantly, it pisses me off that there are SEVERAL paragraphs IN A ROW that begin with the word "Then". Well, so, it seems interesting, the plot is not complicated and there are no jumps from topic to another