Future Progression

Fabulous! This is a great novel for Mary Christmas presents. Wow! Best gift to readers. The use of simple language and proverbs reflects the best understanding of the stories in each chapter.

Interesting premise and nice characterisation, however I believe that the world background should have a little more work done on it. All together it is a good read.

In the beginning I was skeptical and a bit confused, but later I became intrigued and continued reading. Really this book does that to you! Its great, well-written, descriptive. You'll love what the author has in store for you. Do give this story a chance!

Really enjoying this story so far. A few issues with grammar aside, this is a highly effective story with interesting characters and nicely developing plot. I may have to seek out the previous book in the series as I was a bit lost during the first chapter, but everything since has been coming together nicely. Good effort!

Good read based on everything I see so far. Like the concepts going on for a contemporary romance like this, makes it unique from most others.

A modern novel with magic powers and different planets? Sounds good right. When I read it the first time, I was like I don't know what's happening. But later chapters are intriguing with a tinge of mystery mixed. I didn't understand a lot until I read the other book about what happened to the ray. The good grammar, well written, and nice story building. What else do you need? Try it! I am sure you won't be disappointed.

Of course! The writer's pen has established ideas for victory. This is a very fascinating story. Readers are getting accustomed to reading it. The author is climbing the ladder of success.

The concept of the story and the characters are interesting. Although, you have a good storyline going on, there are some points where you can improved it, like some issue with the construction of the plots. Overall, I would say that it was a nice read.

Interesting premise and characters; there're several grammatical errors and perhaps some improvement on the world background is needed? but all in all very intriguing and a nice read!

Okay wow, some paragraph lengths are a little longer and there may be deliberate attempts that may hold intact the story later, it is important to leave a few hints or elaboration since that makes the story a little hinged enough for the reader especially ones who dont hold imaginative caliber. Would suggest a re-edit just thoroughly in chapters 6,8,9 and 11 especially! All the best

The plot is really interesting and it definitely gets the reader hooked. I like how everything is so detailed and very well-described. I personally like the main character and her story so I will try the first novel as well!

very interesting plot. apart from romance and fantasy, I feel like there's quite mystery too which I quite like! I don't think you should explain more since that is what makes the story ao intruiging! Good luck on your journey of writing

Great work, it is relaxing and very interesting and makes one want to know/read more. The characters are interesting though I feel like the plot is not explaining enogh. This is a good work, keep it up!!!

Interesting characters and plot. The story is smooth paced. Just give a little more description of the settings or their world background. The word description is easy to understand and that's good. Keep up the nice work author! 👏👏👏