Author here, i'm still really young and there is a lot i could lean so i would appreciate constant feedback and pointing out things that i did wrong, but at least do it in a helpful way.
4 years ago
2
JaydenAndMore
It is yet to have many chapters but i see some good potential in this story from the setup and direction. Hope more people will find this webnovel keep writing.
4 years ago
2
Majay_MJ
Not terrible but it's not amazing, have to see how it progresses to give it a fair ranking. Other than that author keep working on the novel.
4 years ago
1
moped1244
well written
dont know about story development because of lack of chapters otherwise nothing to complain about
let the mc grow on and off the field and the story will turn out great
Author here, i'm still really young and there is a lot i could lean so i would appreciate constant feedback and pointing out things that i did wrong, but at least do it in a helpful way.
It is yet to have many chapters but i see some good potential in this story from the setup and direction. Hope more people will find this webnovel keep writing.
Not terrible but it's not amazing, have to see how it progresses to give it a fair ranking. Other than that author keep working on the novel.
well written dont know about story development because of lack of chapters otherwise nothing to complain about let the mc grow on and off the field and the story will turn out great
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