FINALY A STORY WITHOUT A SYSTEM.
Do you have idea how hard it is to find fan fic's like this? just because of that I will give this story 5 Stars
4 years ago
27
War_Lock
This story is just amazing , Please don't drop the book no matter what . I love how there is Yuri , Don't care about the negative comments just write how you feel .
4 years ago
14
Evil_Dude
I don't care if story good or bad. only thing I care about is no system. no copy paste menu. and no random numbers for statue which doesn't contribute to the story
4 years ago
5
maelvoid_2025
I'm sorry I just can't continue past ch3.
The embellishment you put into the mc background was really unecessary, then on top of that you skipped the school arc which should been where you built foundation for the future plot. This story was really a disappointment.
You made him have such an "amazing"background only to pull such a stunt. What made me drop was when I took a peak at ch4.
I love bleach story where our mc without system or whatever cheat ,natural talent and hard work is fine ,cheat and system just killed the story ,never interested in those kind of stories ,this is one of the few where our mc did not fear aizen eventho our mc know his power after his ultimate evolution ,our mc not overpowered without reason or with cheat ,enjoying life in soul society and make friends ,casual about the plot ,not trying hard to change the plot but intervene when it involved our mc friends ,a reasonable overpowered mc but with good background and progress ,this story is great ,hope for more ,thank you.
a year ago
0
Classified
story is amazing but is the author going continue?????????????¿?¿????¿?????¿????¿???¿????????????¿??????????¿??????????¿?????????????¿????????
2 years ago
0
greencross
very good, 10/10, keep it up, don't let it fall, I like where the story goes[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
3 years ago
0
Yachiru_Unohana
THis Was Really Good In My Opinion I Hope to see another chapter!!!
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4 years ago
0
ThouShaltNotDie
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4 years ago
0
Sr_Tobi
I like it, I already want to see what types of confrontations there will be with the butterfly effect and some other fun chapter like that cliche of a beach chapter, if the author wants to put a little comedy on it, among other things.
4 years ago
0
Lal_Kenji8thkazaha
Incredible its unique to see something without a system nowadays and the story is going on nicely together with the writing and spacing of paragraphs well done author-sama pls dont drop its just too good for me honestly I really love it
4 years ago
0
Lyroy34
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4 years ago
0
Amir_Blumenfeld
awesome story
awesome update speed
keep up the good work, author-san.
FINALY A STORY WITHOUT A SYSTEM. Do you have idea how hard it is to find fan fic's like this? just because of that I will give this story 5 Stars
This story is just amazing , Please don't drop the book no matter what . I love how there is Yuri , Don't care about the negative comments just write how you feel .
I don't care if story good or bad. only thing I care about is no system. no copy paste menu. and no random numbers for statue which doesn't contribute to the story
I'm sorry I just can't continue past ch3. The embellishment you put into the mc background was really unecessary, then on top of that you skipped the school arc which should been where you built foundation for the future plot. This story was really a disappointment. You made him have such an "amazing"background only to pull such a stunt. What made me drop was when I took a peak at ch4.
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I love bleach story where our mc without system or whatever cheat ,natural talent and hard work is fine ,cheat and system just killed the story ,never interested in those kind of stories ,this is one of the few where our mc did not fear aizen eventho our mc know his power after his ultimate evolution ,our mc not overpowered without reason or with cheat ,enjoying life in soul society and make friends ,casual about the plot ,not trying hard to change the plot but intervene when it involved our mc friends ,a reasonable overpowered mc but with good background and progress ,this story is great ,hope for more ,thank you.
story is amazing but is the author going continue?????????????¿?¿????¿?????¿????¿???¿????????????¿??????????¿??????????¿?????????????¿????????
very good, 10/10, keep it up, don't let it fall, I like where the story goes[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
THis Was Really Good In My Opinion I Hope to see another chapter!!! ghnbsgdhacennnnnnbbefsvsehvbwehbvwehbsvibvseibvwiesbvebvbeviwbsevsiebvsevbsevsefsvvevesvevndbgnbghnbvghnbvdghnbvghdnb
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I like it, I already want to see what types of confrontations there will be with the butterfly effect and some other fun chapter like that cliche of a beach chapter, if the author wants to put a little comedy on it, among other things.
Incredible its unique to see something without a system nowadays and the story is going on nicely together with the writing and spacing of paragraphs well done author-sama pls dont drop its just too good for me honestly I really love it
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awesome story awesome update speed keep up the good work, author-san.