Suzuki Akira died a year after his brother mysteriously vanished. Yet he meets a special woman who gives him a special offer. Lets see where his next journey will lead him to.
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Its interesting,good grammar and has a bit of an info dump(tho not that much) and the first world is Dannachi which i love! Can i ask the author for somr extra tags?
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I like the story so far , love your choice of background and the World you decided to mix . The only thing that i hate is the MC personality , he is an ***** he has experience with life whereas good or bad ,with women too as you explained HOWEVER he is a fucking blushing mess . This mf blushes at every good looking woman he sees . It’s honestly tiring even some light teasing mf blush Except for that it’s nice
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A decent ff but something about the Mc and how he is speaking is irritating me... can´t really grasp it, but overall a very enjoyable ff with a little bit too many explanations. For me, I think people only read ff that already know about the original story so too many detailed explanations are unneeded. (Just my opinion thou)
Interesting and great grammer. Also, it is really detailed so if u have no idea what a topic is, it is usually explained later in the chapter. Great story all around.
An interesting start. Lots of information and philosophy. Good grammar, which will be understood by those who do not initially speak English. I liked it. Keep writing.
5 stars for writing quality! I enjoyed this very much, keep up the good work and keep updating regulary! :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
i enjoyed it and bookmarked ..............................................................................................................................
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