Prototype: Apex Predator

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The Author here, dont mind me just flatering myself. This js just a story for fun so i hope you have as much or even more fun reading than i have writing. Thank you for reading and... enjoy. All the best!

Writing quality 4 Stability of updates 4 Story development 1 Character design 1 World background 2 It's too predictable. Rather than a predator, MC is more like a shameless thief who only knows how to eat. He has no other goal other than eating and getting stronger, which would be fine, until you ask the question, "for what?".. I mean, he's practically immortal. This story is too predictable, MC just goes around devouring people, completely relying on his abilities, there's no suspence, no action, no romance, no storyline, nothing, just pure shamelessness. Add an extra character in Naruto who devours every other character by the end, and there you have it.

This is best novel I read in a while. well nvm -------- --- To all the people who love evil mc. i would like to rec. some novels to you. Even though i know that most of you may have already seen all the ones below, but still why not just chk.it in case: try these > Reverend Insanity, Reincarnation Paradise, Warlock of Magus world, Netheril's Glory, Soul of Negary, Legend of the Black Dragon Devouring the Stars, Night evolution [ people have mixed thought about it, either u like it or either not ], PIRATE’S MOST ARROGANT AND HIGH PROFILE MAN [ mc is arrogant ], ABYSS DEMON OF ALL REALMS, PIRATE’S BROOD ORDER, I AM A MAGIC SWORD [ here mc is a sword, so not as per everyone liking, try it ], Starting with the Redmoon [ try to see if u like this genre ], Chapter of the Olden Days, Ascending the Heavens as an Evil God [ best in my list ], Hyperspace Transmigration, fantasy world transmigration [][][] THESE are the only ones that are either translated or can be found in google...just by searching.. [][][] There r many others which are in uukanshu or some other chinese raw sites, but well leave it for some other time.=====

One of the best naruto fan-fics that I have read! Definitely worth the read. The mc is evil but he does not kill needlessly, he only kills and consumes people or things that will help him in his path while not having all 5 great nations team up against him. The mc is super smart and the story has some political schemes that make sense and follow through, barely any plotholes if there are any at all. It is just a very good read overall! MILD SPOILER: He does have some humanity in him because whatever he eats, he gains there memories and how they think, he won’t really become them though.

i'm very confused and my day is ruined bye....................................................................................................

The way the descriptions are made, the way all of his actions affects the history and the author knows how to bring it the best way, the way the MC is consistent and has a linear way of thought and a likeable personality, among many other things makes this one of the best of the best to read, I heavily recommend it.

This novel definitely deserve good reviews my request with the readers would be atleast read first 5 chapters you will be hooked on this rather than reading the first chapter and dropping it.

bro listen to me you want a strong, smart, and ruthless mc that uses his power to his maximum to achieve his goals, them this is the fan-fiction that you have always wanted. This is one of the best I have ever read on webnovel

The plot is wonderful and easy to understand while at the same time, it could be more descriptive on how characters look, act , or talk and the environment and the setting.

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Writing Quality: 5 Stability of Updates:4 Story Development:5 Character Design:4 World Background:4 _________________________________________________________________

A bit of a rough start but gets good pretty fast.

haven't read this yet, but i'm giving it 5 stars just for the concept.